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2015-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie~ It already come the Summer. The heat of Korea reach the climax in August. But these days temperature high until 37 degrees. It is similar human body temperature. Global abnormal weather is global problems. Well... anyway If I will change something in the school, I will make a nap time. When I was high school student, I couldn't play something in physical education class. Because almost teacher and students consider that physical education don't need. Students demanded more time for study. So we used the physical time to prep time. But almost students appeal for less sleepy, then we took nap. I think that appropriate nap improve learning ability. Nap is good medicine. So sometimes we will have a stress, we will demand free times.

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Good morning [이름]! Oh my! You really love sleeping. You\'re talking about it again. Hahaha ^_^ Anyway, thanks for sharing your idea. Have a great day! See you soon! ~T. Jessie~ Hello Jessie~ >> Correct!It already come the Summer. >> It is already summer. The heat of Korea reach the climax in August. >> The heat in Koera reaches its climax in August.But these days temperature high until 37 degrees. >> But these days, the temperature is around 37 degrees. It is similar human body temperature. >> It is similar to human body temperature. Global abnormal weather is global problems.>> Global abnormal weather is a global problem.Well... anyway If I will change something in the school, I will make a nap time. >> Well, anyway if I will change something in the school, I will make a nap time. When I was high school student, I couldn\'t play something in physical education class. >> When I was a high school student, I couldn\'t play something in physical education class.Because almost teacher and students consider that physical education don\'t need. >> Because almost all teachers and students think that physical education is not needed.Students demanded more time for study. >> Correct!So we used the physical time to prep time. >> So we used the physical education time for prep time.But almost students appeal for less sleepy, then we took nap. >> But most students want to sleep for a while, so we took a nap. I think that appropriate nap improve learning ability.>> I think that appropriate nap improves learning ability.Nap is good medicine. >> Nap is a good medicine. So sometimes we will have a stress, we will demand free times. >> So sometimes if we are stress, we demand for free time.

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