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: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,
what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Hello Jessie~
I have very hard time. Because I survive serious sleepiness. haha.
Anyway the number of virus infection is 30.
The number of suspected patient is more than 1000.
I pay attention to real-time situation
I really happy to hear that.
I want to study various thing.
Complex math and scientific book exclude. haha
Umm... I want to learn acting.
So I experience a various job and situation.
I think that actor get older more and more handsome.
That reason I will be wonderful old actress.
And I learn to cook. These day I realize eating well is very important.
Chef is clearly specialized job.
Because delicious food take care of mental health.
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Thanks for sending another composition.
I really hope that there will be a cure for MERs.
Anyway, you have to be safe always.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.Hello Jessie~
>> Correct!I have very hard time.
>> I\'m having a very hard time.
Because I survive serious sleepiness. haha.
>> Because I am trying to survive against serious sleepiness.Anyway the number of virus infection is 30.
>> Anyway, the number of infected people is 30.The number of suspected patient is more than 1000.
>> The number of suspected patients is more than 1000.I pay attention to real-time situation
>> I paid attendtion to real-time situations. I really happy to hear that.
>> I\'m really happy to hear that.I want to study various thing.
>> I want to study various things except complex math and science.
Complex math and scientific book exclude. haha>> I want to study various things except complex math and science.
Umm... I want to learn acting.
>> Correct!So I experience a various job and situation.
>> So I experience various jobs and situations.I think that actor get older more and more handsome.
>> I think that actors become more handsome as they grow old.That reason I will be wonderful old actress.
>> Because of that reason, I will be a wonderful old actress.And I learn to cook.
>> And I will learn how to cook.
These day I realize eating well is very important.
>> These days, I realize that eating well is very important. Chef is clearly specialized job.
>> Being a chef is clearly a specialized job.Because delicious food take care of mental health.
>> Because delicious food takes care of mental health.
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