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2015-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details. Hello Jessie~ I have very hard time. Because I survive serious sleepiness. haha. Anyway the number of virus infection is 30. The number of suspected patient is more than 1000. I pay attention to real-time situation I really happy to hear that. I want to study various thing. Complex math and scientific book exclude. haha Umm... I want to learn acting. So I experience a various job and situation. I think that actor get older more and more handsome. That reason I will be wonderful old actress. And I learn to cook. These day I realize eating well is very important. Chef is clearly specialized job. Because delicious food take care of mental health.

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[이름]! Thanks for sending another composition. I really hope that there will be a cure for MERs. Anyway, you have to be safe always. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ : If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.Hello Jessie~ >> Correct!I have very hard time. >> I\'m having a very hard time. Because I survive serious sleepiness. haha. >> Because I am trying to survive against serious sleepiness.Anyway the number of virus infection is 30. >> Anyway, the number of infected people is 30.The number of suspected patient is more than 1000. >>  The number of suspected patients is more than 1000.I pay attention to real-time situation >> I paid attendtion to real-time situations. I really happy to hear that. >> I\'m really happy to hear that.I want to study various thing. >> I want to study various things except complex math and science. Complex math and scientific book exclude. haha>> I want to study various things except complex math and science. Umm... I want to learn acting. >> Correct!So I experience a various job and situation. >> So I experience various jobs and situations.I think that actor get older more and more handsome. >> I think that actors become more handsome as they grow old.That reason I will be wonderful old actress. >> Because of that reason, I will be a wonderful old actress.And I learn to cook. >> And I will learn how to cook. These day I realize eating well is very important. >> These days, I realize that eating well is very important. Chef is clearly specialized job. >> Being a chef is clearly a specialized job.Because delicious food take care of mental health. >> Because delicious food takes care of mental health.

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