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If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose?
Why?
Hello Jessie~
Today my condition is very good.
I'm not feel tired and sleepiness for a long time.
I think that's pineapple. haha.
These days I want to eat vitamin to chronic fatigue.
So I bought pineapple and ate all of pineapple.
I will buy it again. hee.hee
Anyway I will cancel our class by tomorrow.
Because I will go to London. haha,
As soon as possible I will go to travel abroad.
Tomorrow is Friday so I am lazy. ^^
Umm... If I can exhibit to something, I will exhibit Korean alphabet "Hangul"
Hangul is very beautiful language.
And it is simple and easy reading and speaking.
It is only language to record principle and who makes it.
Hangul is only Korea culture and language.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
[이름]! Don\'t be too lazy! Haha
I won\'t be accepting that reason next time. ^_^
Well, you better enjoy this happy Friday then and let\'s talk on Monday.
Take care always!
~T. Jessie~
If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose?Why?Hello Jessie~
>> Correct!Today my condition is very good.
>> Correct!
>> Today, my condition is very good. I\'m not feel tired and sleepiness for a long time.
>> I don\'t feel tired nor sleepy.
OR>> I haven\'t felt tired nor sleepy for a long time.I think that\'s pineapple. haha.
>> I think it\'s because of pineapple. haha.These days I want to eat vitamin to chronic fatigue.
>> These days, I want to eat food with vitamins to avoid chronic fatigue.So I bought pineapple and ate all of pineapple.
>> So I bought a pineapple and ate all of it.I will buy it again. hee.hee
>> Correct!Anyway I will cancel our class by tomorrow.
>> Anyway, I wil postpone our class for tomorrow.Because I will go to London. haha,
>> Correct!As soon as possible I will go to travel abroad.
>> As soon as possible, I will travel abroad.Tomorrow is Friday so I am lazy. ^^>> Correct!Umm... If I can exhibit to something, I will exhibit Korean alphabet \"Hangul\"
>> Umm... If I can exhibit something, I will exhibit Korean alphabet \"Hangul.\"
Hangul is very beautiful language.
>> Hangul is a very beautiful language.And it is simple and easy reading and speaking.
>> And it is simple and easy to read and speak.
It is only language to record principle and who makes it.
>> Do you mean: It is the only language that records a principle and the one who makes it.Hangul is only Korea culture and language.
>> Do you mean: Hangul is Korea\'s language and it reflects our culture.
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