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2015-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Wow... I am really tired. When I hang up the phone, Suddenly I feel very tired. So I drowse while I ate lunch. haha 1. running to the car the is reporter - The reporter is running to the car. 2. does tennis not friend my play - My friend does not play tennis. 3. grandmother never his goes skating - His grandmother never goes skating. 4. see hamsters cannot I two - I cannot see two hamsters. 5. the breakfast has always kitchen Jack in - Jack always has breakfast in the kitchen.

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Good afternoon! [이름]! You did a great job sleepy head. But don\'t sleep again. ^_^ You have to exercise. Hello Jessie. Anyway, enjoy the rest of the day. See you! ~T. Jessie~ >> Correct!Wow... I am really tired. >> Correct!When I hang up the phone, Suddenly I feel very tired. >> When I hung up the phone, I suddenly felt tired.So I drowse while I ate lunch. haha>> So I drowsed after eating lunch. haha1. running to the car the is reporter- The reporter is running to the car.>> Correct!2. does tennis not friend my play- My friend does not play tennis. >> Correct!3. grandmother never his goes skating- His grandmother never goes skating.>> Correct!4. see hamsters cannot I two- I cannot see two hamsters. >> Correct!5. the breakfast has always kitchen Jack in- Jack always has breakfast in the kitchen. >> Correct!

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