Home Work
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.
Hello Jessie~
Usually I am thankful your advice about study.
It is also attitude of life.
Umm...Promise is my shortage practice. haha
Every day I fail to keep a day of goal, but the more important thing is not to stop.
I know that my lips is just alive.
I agree that children have to help household work.
Because I consider that experience of failure need young child.
As a child feel hard about household work.
Naturally sometimes household tasks is little hard.
But household tasks advance sense of responsibility,patience.
If one child clean his room or cook, he will feel fulfilled in his mind.
One weakness is that tasks lead to tired. ^^
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Good after noon [이름]!
Thanks for once again expressing your opinion.
I agree with it. They should learn to be responsible and patient through doing some/ a few household tasks.
Anyway, please go over your sentences.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Hello Jessie~
>> Correct!Usually I am thankful your advice about study.
>> I am usually thankful of your advice about studying. It is also attitude of life.
>> Do you mean: It is also realted to the attitude in life.
Umm...Promise is my shortage practice. haha
>> Keeping a promise is one of my weaknesses.Every day I fail to keep a day of goal, but the more important thing is not to stop.
>> Every day I fail to attain my daily goal,s but the more important thing is not to stop.I know that my lips is just alive.>> I know that my lips have a purpose.I agree that children have to help household work.
>> I agree that children have to help with household work. Because I consider that experience of failure need young child.
>> Because I believe that children should experience failures.As a child feel hard about household work.
>> As a child, they will have difficulty doing household work.Naturally sometimes household tasks is little hard.
>> Naturally, sometimes ,household tasks is a little hard. But household tasks advance sense of responsibility,patience.
>> But household tasks advance one\'s sense of responsibility and patience.If one child clean his room or cook, he will feel fulfilled in his mind.>> If one child cleans his room or cooks, he will be fulfilled.
One weakness is that tasks lead to tired. ^^
>> One weakness is that tasks lead to tiredness. ^^
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