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: Who is the most influential person in your life?
How did this person make you want to become better?
Hello Jessie^^
I want to go travel. I need new stimulation.
But this month is deficit.
Expenditure is more than import. Umm... Cause is shopping and grocery.
Because my family member is four. So it spend more money.
And these days I love pineapple.
I eat pineapple in everyday. haha
Maybe Korea fruit price is more expensive than Philippine.
I want to go fruit shopping to Philippiness. haha
Anyway let's start homework.
This topic is hard choice.
My life is influenced many people.
Umm... The most influent person is no one.
Naturally my parents, my friend, writer teacher aid to change in my life.
But I think that my life is normal.
I decided that I live better than the last year on the end of the year.
Not yet my life is ongoing.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Life is really difficult but it will get better. ^_^
The price of fruits here is much cheaper than your country.
You better come here. ^_^
See you! ^^I\'ll wait for you.
~T. Jessie~
Who is the most influential person in your life? How did this person make you want to become better?Hello Jessie^^\\
>> Correct!I want to go travel.
>> I want to travel.
I need new stimulation.
>> Correct!But this month is deficit.
>> Correct!Expenditure is more than import.
>> Expenditure is more than my income.
Umm... Cause is shopping and grocery.
>> Because of shopping and grocery.
OR>> The cause is shopping and grocery.Because my family member is four.
>> Correct!
OR>> Because my family has four members.
So it spend more money.
>> So we need to spend more money.And these days I love pineapple.
>> Correct!I eat pineapple in everyday. haha
>> I eat pineapple everyday. hahaMaybe Korea fruit price is more expensive than Philippine.
>> Maybe the prices of fruits in Korea is more expensive than in the Philippines.I want to go fruit shopping to Philippiness. haha>> I want to go fruit shopping in the Philippines. hahaAnyway let\'s start homework.
>> Anyway let\'s start the homework. This topic is hard choice.
>> This topic is hard.
OR>> It is difficult to choose.My life is influenced many people. >> My life is influenced by many people. Umm... The most influent person is no one.
>> Correct!
OR>> Nobody influenced me the most.
Naturally my parents, my friend, writer teacher aid to change in my life.
>> Naturally my parents, my friend, my writing teacher aided in changing my life.
But I think that my life is normal.
>> Correct!I decided that I live better than the last year on the end of the year.
>> I decided that I will live my life better than last year.Not yet my life is ongoing.
>> My life is still ongoing.
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