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2015-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Roxy

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Grammar Exercise: What's the correct word order? 1. a / fix / mechanic / cars a mechanic fix cars 2. at / the / cry / night / baby baby cry at the night 3. east / the / rise / the / in / sun the sun is rise the east 4. eats / she / breakfast / for / carrots she eats carrots for breakfast 5. her / children / worries / always / about / she she always worries about her chidren 6. brush / breakfast / his / he / after / teeth he brush his teeth after breakfast 7. speak / students / the / the / classroom / English / in students speak the english in the classroom 8. the / carries / MP3 / she / all / player / a / time she carries a mp3 player all the time 9. people / lawyer / a / in / defend / trouble ??? 10.listening / enjoys / Mary / classical / to / music mary enjoys listening to music

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

So far so good!!!

You did a good job and thank you for giving time and effort to answer this homework.

Do not forget to use a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence and for proper nouns.

Always remember your punctuation marks also.

Below are the corrections for you to study.

That\'s all for now and talk to you soon. 

Teacher Roxy

xoxoxo

1. a / fix / mechanic / cars

a mechanic fix cars

>> CORRECT (A mechanic fix cars.)

OR >> A mechanic fixes cars.

2. at / the / cry / night / baby
baby cry at the night

>> The baby cry at night.

OR >> The baby cries at night.

3. east / the / rise / the / in / sun
the sun is rise the east

>> The sun rise in the East. 

OR >> The sun rises in the East.

4. eats / she / breakfast / for / carrots
she eats carrots for breakfast
>>CORRECT (She eats carrots for breakfast.)
5. her / children / worries / always / about / she
 she always worries about her children
>>   CORRECT (She always worries about her children.) 
6. brush / breakfast / his / he / after / teeth
he brush his teeth after breakfast

>>   CORRECT (He brush his teeth after breakfast.)

OR >> He brushes his teeth after breakfast.

7. speak / students / the / the / classroom / English / in
students speak the english in the classroom
>> The students speak English in the classroom. 
8. the / carries / MP3 / she / all / player / a / time
she carries a mp3 player all the time

>>  CORRECT (She carries a MP 3 player all the time.)

OR >> She carries an MP 3 player all the time.

9. people / lawyer / a / in / defend / trouble
???

>> A lawyer defend people in trouble.

OR >> A lawyer defends people in trouble. 

10.listening / enjoys / Mary / classical / to / music

mary enjoys listening to music

>> Mary enjoys listening to classical music.

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