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2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: The education a child receives at home from having parents who are positive role models is more important than the academic education a child receives at school. Do you agree or disagree? Hello Jessie. I appreciate your lesson and comment. I'm glad to study with you. Oh, And I will have to quit a work after 2 weeks. I'm embarrassed. haha. Suddenly CEO notify to me. Umm... Honestly I don't have any plan. Well.. But that's OK. Because I am luck girl. ^^ So get solve problem. Anyway I agree that home education is important to child. I think that child's character form from their parents. Child is mirror of adult. And however school education also important. Child receive sociality in school. The best way is child realize to something in anywhere.^^

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Good afternoon [이름]! That is so sad to hear. But I know that you can find a better job for you. Fighting! Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion. I\'ll see you on Thursday! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: The education a child receives at home from having parents who are positive role models is more important than the academic education a child receives at school.Do you agree or disagree?Hello Jessie. >> Correct!I appreciate your lesson and comment. >> Correct!I\'m glad to study with you. >> Correct!Oh, And I will have to quit a work after 2 weeks. >> Oh,  I have to quit work after 2 weeks. I\'m embarrassed. haha. >> Correct!Suddenly CEO notify to me. >> The CEO suddenly notified me.Umm... Honestly I don\'t have any plan. >> Umm... Honestly, I don\'t have any plans.Well.. But that\'s OK. >> Well,  that\'s OK. Because I am luck girl. ^^ >> Because I am a lucky girl. ^^So get solve problem.>> So the problem will be solved.Anyway I agree that home education is important to child. >> Anyway, I agree that home education is important to children. I think that child\'s character form from their parents.>> I think that a child\'s character is formed by her/his parents.Child is mirror of adult. >> A child is the reflection of an adult.And however school education also important. >> However, academic education is also important. Child receive sociality in school. >> A child socializes in school.The best way is child realize to something in anywhere.^^ >> The best way is the child realizes something everywhere she/he goes.

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