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2015-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do you ever try to impose your beliefs on others? Yes, I do. On a second thought, I tried to impose my beliefs and my tastes on others many times, specially I did to my husband. When I met him at first, I felt he is not a kind person. He was a kind of individualist. Even more, he never said hello to others first. On the other hand, I am very open minded and easy to close person with anybody. I tried to make him kind and sweet person. We have argued on this matter many times after marrige. He is not chaged perfectly now but he can give smile to strangers now. I also advise to others about their personel matters. but frankly, It's not a advice,I push them to do what I want. I want to say to myself "Mind your own bussiness [이름]" Hi Kelly~~ I am really appriciated that your delicate comment about me. You are so good teacher to me. I am thingking ,,,If I had met a teacher like you, I would have gone to Harvard Univirsity.

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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. I really enjoyed reading your composition because I am getting to know you more and more each day. You are a good influence to your husband because he is more friendly now. kkk. But I am also curious, how did your husband influence you? Anyway, see you again tomorrow ma\'am. Enjoy the rest of your day!^^ ~Kelly^^ Do you ever try to impose your beliefs on others?Yes, I do. >> Correct.On a second thought, I tried to impose my beliefs and my tastes on others many times, specially I did to my husband. >> On a second thought, I tried to impose my beliefs and tastes on others many times, specially to my husband. When I met him at first, I felt he is not a kind person. >> When I first met him, I felt that he was not a kind person. He was a kind of individualist. >> Correct. Even more, he never said hello to others first. >> Correct. On the other hand, I am very open minded and easy to close person with anybody. >> On the other hand, I am a very open minded person who can get close with anybody easily. I tried to make him kind and sweet person. >> I influenced him to be a kind and sweet person. We have argued on this matter many times after marrige. >> We have argued on this matter many times after marriage. He is not chaged perfectly now but he can give smile to strangers now. >> He has not changed perfectly but he can smile to strangers now.I also advise to others about their personel matters. >> I also advise others about their personel matters. but frankly, It\'s not a advice,I push them to do what I want. >> But frankly speaking, it\'s not an advice because I push them to do what I want.I want to say to myself \"Mind your own bussiness [이름]\">> I want to tell to myself \"mind your own business [이름]\"Hi Kelly~~ I am really appriciated that your delicate comment about me. >> Hi Kelly~~ I really appreciate your delicate comment about me. You are so good teacher to me. >> You are a good teacher to me. I am thingking ,,,If I had met a teacher like you, I would have gone to Harvard Univirsity. >> I am thinking, had I met a teacher like you, I would have gone to Harvard University.

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