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Would you consider yourself to be an ambitious person at work?
Frankly speaking, I am not a person who is an ambitious at work.
I have been working for this jop more than 16 years, then I know how to do and how to handle my work very well. When I first worked, I was also enthusiastic about my work as everyone does. However,unfortunately, I am getting lose ambition for my work slowly.
With this question, I can reflect myself and also I ask for myself to be an ambitious person again. It's very valuable time to think about me during I write this essay.
Hi! Kelly~~ Do you know why I study English at Power English? Because I can learn life as well as English. I can ask many different kinds of question to myself.
No one ask me that kind of profoud question. 'Would you consider yourself to be an ambitious person at work?" kkk
It's hard and takes long time to write. evenmore,I should be a philosopher sometimes.kkk
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!!
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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!^^
I hope I did not pressure you with my question. While reading your composition, I realized that you are such a deep person. I really hope that I could get to know you more as we talk each day. You are an amazing person!^^
~Kelly^^
Would you consider yourself to be an ambitious person at work?Frankly speaking, I am not a person who is an ambitious at work.
>> Frankly speaking, I am not a person who is ambitious at work. I have been working for this jop more than 16 years, then I know how to do and how to handle my work very well.
>> I have been working for this job for more than 16 years, so I know how to do it and handle it very well.
When I first worked, I was also enthusiastic about my work as everyone does.
>> When I first worked, I was also enthusiastic about it as everyone did.
However, unfortunately, I am getting lose ambition for my work slowly.
>> However, I am starting to lose my ambition for work slowly.With this question, I can reflect myself and also I ask for myself to be an ambitious person again.
>> With this question, I can reflect on myself and ask myself to be an ambitious person again.
It\'s very valuable time to think about me during I write this essay.
>> It\'s a very valuable time for me to think about myself while writing this essay.Hi! Kelly~~ Do you know why I study English at Power English?
>> Correct.
Because I can learn life as well as English.
>> Because I can learn about life as well as English.
I can ask many different kinds of question to myself.
>> Correct.No one ask me that kind of profoud question.
>> Correct.
\'Would you consider yourself to be an ambitious person at work?\" kkk
>> Correct.It\'s hard and takes long time to write.
>> It\'s hard to answer it and it takes a long time for me to write.
evenmore, I should be a philosopher sometimes.kkk>> Correct.Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!!
>> Correct.
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