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2015-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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composition : what is your greatest fear i feel fear when i'm started new challenges. i didn't know exactly why, but maybe i don't want to be failed. my parents always said to me "have confidence, and you will be successed" first i didn't know what this meant. but slowly i understood. i slowly got confidence. some people thinks i have no fears. but i didn't. all peaple have fears. in <winning habit> , Abbreviations of fear is False Evidence Appearing Real. and that means, fear is false evidence looks very real i still have fear, and when stating new challenges i shiver with fear. but i believe, someday i can beat my fear

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Hello again Harry! I agree with you, every person has fears. Having fear does not mean you are weak. It\'s okay to fear something. But you know, if you are willing to overcome it, you will. :) Thank you so much for this. Catch you again tomorrow. Good night, Harry! ~Teacher Alice i feel fear when i\'m started new challenges. >> I fear when I start doing new challenges.  i didn\'t know exactly why, but maybe i don\'t want to be failed. >> I don\'t exactly know why, but maybe I don\'t want to fail. my parents always said to me \"have confidence, and you will be successed\" >> My parents always tell me, \"Have confidence and you will be successful.\" first i didn\'t know what this meant. >> I didn\'t get what this meant at first. but slowly i understood. >> But I was able to understand eventually. i slowly got confidence. >> Little by little, I gained confidence. some people thinks i have no fears. but i didn\'t. all peaple have fears.>> Some people think I have no fear, but I do. All people have. in <winning habit> , Abbreviations of fear is False Evidence Appearing Real. >> In Winning Habits , the acronym of fear is False Evidence Appearing Real. and that means, fear is false evidence looks very real >>That means fear is not true but looks real. i still have fear, and when stating new challenges i shiver with fear.>> I still have fear and when I start new challenges, I shiver with fear.but i believe, someday i can beat my fear  >> Though I believe, someday, I would be able to overcome my fear.

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