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2015-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in a small town than a big city. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Use not more than 200 words excluding articles and prepositions. i disagree with this statement. some people think small town is better than big city. thay may be right. but i disagree. because it's very hard to live in small town. in small town, hospital, market (and other stuff) are rare to be found. and it means living in small town is very inconvenience. for example i live in small town called sangal and it's very uncomfortable.....i don't know it's piece of luck, i move in another city. and it's very big city called dongtan. i hope live in dongtan is better than living in sangal. anyway i think big city is beetttteeeerrr than small town -the end-(?)

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Hello Harry! Thanks for making this composition about living in a big city versus small town. You are right! I agree with you. Anyway, I\'ll call you again tomorrow! ~Teacher Alice i disagree with this statement. >> I disagree with this statement. some people think small town is better than big city.>> Some people think a small town is better than a big city.thay may be right. but i disagree. >> They may be right but I disagree. because it\'s very hard to live in small town. >> That is because it\'s very hard in small town, hospital, market (and other stuff) are rare to be found. >> In small town, hospital, market and others are rare to find. and it means living in small town is very inconvenience. >> It means living in a small town is very inconvenient. for example i live in small town called sangal and it\'s very uncomfortable..... >> For example, I live in a small town called Sangal, and it\'s very uncomftable. i don\'t know it\'s piece of luck, i move in another city. >> I don\'t know, if it\'s a piece of luck, I\'ll move to another city. and it\'s very big city called dongtan. >> It\'s a big city called Dongtan. i hope live in dongtan is better than living in sangal.>> I hope to live in Dongtan because it\'s better to live there in Sangal. anyway i think big city is beetttteeeerrr than small town>> Anyway, I think the big city is beeetttteeeer than a small town, 

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