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2015-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: How do you feel about going to parties? Do you hold a Christmas party at home? Describe it. I really like going to party and having a party. In my case, holding a party is more usual than I go to a party. I enjoy cooking and arranging party for my friends though I am not a good cook. I like drinking and having nice dishes with good people. I also like talking and sharing my thoughts with others, and meeting some one new. But,,,,, recently I don't meet people around me. because I feel vain meeting friends or acquaintances. Maybe, because I was very dissapointed with one of my friends last month. . I had to spend all the money whenever I met him, even more, he and his wife have taken it for granted that for a long time. then, I had to reflect the way of my relationgships and I am still thinking over what is my problem. Because It might be my fault too. Oh~ Kelly~ I am so sorry to say such an unpleasant story. Don't worry, I am still positive person as you know.

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Good morning, Ma\'am [이름]!^^ Thank you for trusting me with your story. You don\'t have to say sorry about it. Sometimes, we are too kind and generous to our friends and other people that they become so comfortable already to the point that they unintentionally abuse our kind deed and generosity to them. I understand your story.^^ I just hope that everybody would be sensitive of other people\'s feelings and gestures. Anyway, I hope that you are having a great morning! ~Kelly^^ Essay: How do you feel about going to parties? Do you hold a Christmas party at home? Describe it.I really like going to party and having a party. >> I really like going to a party and having a party.   In my case, holding a party is more usual than I go to a party. >> In my case, holding a party is more usual than going to a party.  I enjoy cooking and arranging party for my friends though I am not a good cook. >> Correct. I like drinking and having nice dishes with good people. >> Correct. >> or: I like drinking and having delectable dishes with good people. I also like talking and sharing my thoughts with others, and meeting some one new. >> I also like talking and sharing my thoughts with others, and meeting someone new. But,,,,, recently I don\'t meet people around me. >> Correct. >> But, recently, I don\'t meet people around me. because I feel vain meeting friends or acquaintances. >> Did you mean: Because I am vain, especially when meeting friends or acquaintances. Maybe, because I was very dissapointed with one of my friends last month. . >> Correct. I had to spend all the money whenever I met him, even more, he and his wife have taken it for granted that for a long time. >> I had to spend all my money whenever I meet him, and even more, he and his wife have taken it for granted for a long time. then, I had to reflect the way of my relationgships and I am still thinking over what is my problem. >> Then, I had to reflect about the kind of relationship that I have with them and until now, I am still thinking over what my problem is. Because It might be my fault too. >> Correct. >> or: Because it could be my fault as well. Oh~ Kelly~ I am so sorry to say such an unpleasant story. >> Correct. >> or: Oh~ Kelly~ I am so sorry for sharing such an unpleasant story. Don\'t worry, I am still positive person as you know. >> Don\'t worry, I am still a positive person as you know.

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