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2015-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Q: From the time you started your work/study, what things have been changed? A: First of all, my financial status has been stabilized :), my salary is not very high though. And that definitely changed all. Please don't consider me as a materialist :) It is nothing but a fact. When I just graduated university and came out to this 'Wild' world (joke..), I have absolutely nothing. Youth is great as is, but I was very depressed in those days and had to struggle. Obviously I couldn't enjoy my precious days. Anyway things have been getting better and I started to be more engaged to my life. Of course, i'm still young enough :) There are still many things not satisfactory for myself as well as external factors surrounding me, but I believe I'm growing and my inner-boundary is getting wider and deeper. I wish there will be no more growing pain afterward, but it does not seem avoidable for now. Anyway, let's enjoy the day. That's the key, isn't it?

강사 첨삭

Great day [이름]! Well, what can I say? I totally agree with you. ^^

Though you had a hard time  during your childhood because you had to study hard, but now that you are working, you are already free to do whatever you want and be happy in everything that you do. Being happy in all things that you do is the key. As what you said, you are still young so do things that will make you happy. Talk to you this afternoon so have a great day ahead!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Q: From the time you started your work/study, what things have been changed?

A: First of all, my financial status has been stabilized :),

>> correct! 

my salary is not very high though.

>> correct!  

 And that definitely changed all.

>>correct!  

Please don\'t consider me as a materialist :)

>>correct!  

It is nothing but a fact.

>> correct!  
 When I just graduated university and came out to this \'Wild\' world (joke..), I have absolutely nothing.

>> When I graduated in the university and came out to this \'wild\' world, I have absolutely nothing.

Youth is great as is, but I was very depressed in those days and had to struggle.

>> Youth is great as it is, but I was very depressed during those days and I had to struggle.

Obviously I couldn\'t enjoy my precious days.

>> correct!   
 Anyway things have been getting better and I started to be more engaged to my life.

>> correct!

Of course, i\'m still young enough :)

>> Of course, I am still young! :)
 There are still many things not satisfactory for myself as well as external factors surrounding me, but I believe I\'m growing and my inner-boundary is getting wider and deeper.

>> There are still many things which are unsatisfactory for myself as well as the external surrounding me, but I believe that I am growing and my inner boundary is wider and deeper.

I wish there will be no more growing pain afterward, but it does not seem avoidable for now.

>> I wish that there will be no more growing pain afterwards but it seems that it is unavoidable.
 Anyway, let\'s enjoy the day.

>> correct!

That\'s the key, isn\'t it?

>> correct!

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