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2015-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Is raising a family hard work? Oh~~ Kelly, I don't understand what it means. Does it mean ' Family is getting work hard? Or, Hard famlily work is raising compare to the past? UUUU, I have to give up... Anyway, I was so touched by your comment yesterday. You say ' A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself' When I read the line, I was almost crying and regreted of myself. Because sometimes, I get angry with her without reason, and I felt she annoys me from time to time when she wants to play with me. I feel, I am a bad mom to her. It's is true that she always loves me without any condition. I feel sorry to her deeply and I promise her to give more love. I really thank you for reminding nana's love again. Have a nice day ~~ Kelly!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!^^ I am sorry if my question was quite confusing. What I meant was, is it difficult to create a family? Don\'t worry, I will make my question clearer next time. Anyway, don\'t feel guilty about what I said yesterday because you are a very sweet mom to Nana. It\'s not easy to take care of a puppy. I know that you love her unconditionaly, too.^^ ~Kelly^^ Is raising a family hard work?Oh~~ Kelly, I don\'t understand what it means. >> Correct. Does it mean \' Family is getting work hard? >> Does it mean \'Family is becoming a hard work? Or, Hard famlily work is raising compare to the past? >> Or, family hard work is raising/increasing compared to the past.UUUU, I have to give up... >> Correct.Anyway, I was so touched by your comment yesterday. >> Correct. You say \' A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself\' >> Correct.>> You said:\' A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself\' When I read the line, I was almost crying and regreted of myself. >> When I read the line, I almost cried and regretted something which I did. Because sometimes, I get angry with her without reason, and I felt she annoys me from time to time when she wants to play with me. >> Because sometimes, I get angry with her without any reason, and I feel that she annoys me from time to time when she wants to play with me. I feel, I am a bad mom to her. >> Correct.>> I feel that I\'m a bad mom to her. It\'s is true that she always loves me without any condition. >> Correct. I feel sorry to her deeply and I promise her to give more love. >> Correct.I really thank you for reminding nana\'s love again. >> Correct.Have a nice day ~~ Kelly!!! >> Correct.

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