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In your opinion, what are the five most essential items to pack on any holiday?
When I pack my baggage for a holdiday, my husband is always surpirsed with the size of the bag. because I pack like that I move. therefore it's so difficult to
say five items to me. kkkk
Here is the five items I pack.
Books or something to read
I pack books or magazines but I know that I will not read. but I bring them.
Video recorder.
I want to record every moment with the professional video recorder, but I know that I prefer to record on my smartphone.
Medicine for emergency
I bring digesters and pills for fever, but I am healthier and stronger when I go to a holiday.
Face mask sheets
For protect my face skin, I pack it. but I put it in the refrigirator in a hotel room and I have to birng back when I check out.
Credit card.
It needs no explanation.
As you see, I don't need any items except credit card.
But I will be packing the above items again when I go to a holday. hihihi
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
It\'s really funny that most women pack almost everything inside their closet when they go on a holiday even if they wont use them anyway. I guess, it\'s part of being a woman. We just want to be prepared at all times.kkk. Anyway, thank you for sharing five essential things that you always bring with you whenever you take a trip.^^ I hope that your husband won\'t be surprised anymore next time that you travel together.
~Kelly^^
In your opinion, what are the five most essential items to pack on any holiday?When I pack my baggage for a holdiday, my husband is always surpirsed with the size of the bag.
>> When I pack my baggage for holiday, my husband is always surpirsed with the size of the bag that I use.
because I pack like that I move.
>> Because I pack as if I am going to move in to a new place.
therefore it\'s so difficult to say five items to me. kkkk
>> Therefore, it is difficult to talk about five items only.Here is the five items I pack.
>> Here are the five items that I pack.Books or something to read
I pack books or magazines but I know that I will not read. but I bring them.
>> I pack books or magazines but I know that I will not read, but I bring them. Video recorder.
I want to record every moment with the professional video recorder, but I know that I prefer to record on my smartphone.
>> I want to record every moment with a professional video recorder, but I know that I prefer to record on my smartphone. Medicine for emergencyI bring digesters and pills for fever, but I am healthier and stronger when I go to a holiday.
>> Correct.Face mask sheetsFor protect my face skin, I pack it. but I put it in the refrigirator in a hotel room and I have to birng back when I check out.
>> To protect my face skin, I pack it. But I put it in the hotel room refrigerator so I have to bring it back when I check out.Credit card.It needs no explanation.
>> Correct.As you see, I don\'t need any items except credit card. >> Correct.
But I will be packing the above items again when I go to a holday. hihihi
>> Correct.
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