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2015-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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1. I do not know ________________ he wants. a.) That b.) What< c.) Why d.) Such 2. Students ________________ respect their teachers are good students. a.) Whom b.) Who< c.) Which d.) What 3. It is an ill wind ________________ blows nobody good. a.) What b.) Who c.) That< d.) Whom 4. He says ________________ he means. a.) That b.) What< c.) Which d.) Such 5. God helps those ________________ help themselves. a.) Whose b.) Whom c.) Who< d.) Which Hi~ Kelly~~ It's raining heavily in Korea. If It's colder than now, It may snow. A few years ago, I drove round on the road because of heavy snow. Driving snowing day is very dangerous and causes car accidents. See? Snow is not only beautiful and romantic. It can make many troubles and effects to our daily life such as collaps of facilities, injury from slippery road and dirty road after snow melt. Do I break your fantacy? KKK It's OK, I know, for all that everybody loves snow!!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ma\'am [이름]!

Be safe when going home. I hope that the rain will already stop by that time. Anyway, I have dreamed of going to a snowy place but after reading your story, I realized that what I know about snowy weather is just superficial. kkk. I hope that you will always stay safe and warm this cold season.^^

~Kelly^^

1. I do not know ________________ he wants.
a.) That
b.) What<
c.) Why
d.) Such
>> Correct.
2. Students ________________ respect their teachers are good students.
a.) Whom
b.) Who<
c.) Which
d.) What
>> Correct.
3. It is an ill wind ________________ blows nobody good.
a.) What
b.) Who
c.) That<
d.) Whom
>> Correct.
4. He says ________________ he means.
a.) That
b.) What<
c.) Which
d.) Such
>> Correct.
5. God helps those ________________ help themselves.
a.) Whose
b.) Whom
c.) Who<
d.) Which
>> Correct.
Hi~ Kelly~~ It\'s raining heavily in Korea.

>> Correct.

If It\'s colder than now, It may snow.

>> If it will be colder than now, it may snow.

A few years ago, I drove round on the road because of heavy snow.

>> A few years ago, I drove around on the road because of heavy snow.

Driving snowing day is very dangerous and causes car accidents.

>> Driving on a snowy day is very dangerous and it causes car accidents.
See? Snow is not only beautiful and romantic.

>> Correct.

It can make many troubles and effects to our daily life such as collaps of facilities, injury from slippery road and dirty road after snow melt.

>> It can cause many troubles and bad effects to our daily life such as collapse of facilities, injury from slippery road and dirty road after snow melts.
Do I break your fantacy? KKK

>> Correct.

*** fantasy
It\'s OK, I know, for all that everybody loves snow!!

>> It\'s OK, for I know that everybody loves snow!!

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