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2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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If you could meet a famous celebrity, who would that be and why? I really want to meet someone who is very kind, very patient and intellectual woman. She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everday. Her voice is so delightful,charming and bright. If you hear her voice, you should be happy with her voice. She always tries to listen to others like everybody's friend. She never has excused or complained of her work and her life. because she is a positive and open minded person. I know she must be very strict to herself not to make fault, but she is genrous to others. She is a small girl but her mind is deeper and bigger than anyone. I wish I can meet her someday indeed. Her name is Kelly. One of the best teacher in Power English!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

WOW!!!! What can I say? I am so flattered with what I just read. I really don\'t know what to say. Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I guess, I am just kind and patient to people who are also sincere and very pleasant to me. And you are one of those people. Even if we have just met for a short time, I feel so comfortable and at ease talking with you. I really hope that we could meet someday.^^

~Kelly^^

If you could meet a famous celebrity, who would that be and why?
I really want to meet someone who is very kind, very patient and intellectual woman.

>> I really want to meet someone who is very kind, very patient and intellectual.
She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everyday.

>> Correct.
 Her voice is so delightful,charming and bright.

>> Correct.

If you hear her voice, you should be happy with her voice. 

>> If you hear her voice, you will be happy.
She always tries to listen to others like everybody\'s friend. 

>> Correct.
She never has excused or complained of her work and her life.

>> She never has an excuse or complaint of her work and her life.

because she is a positive and open minded person. 

>> Correct.
I know she must be very strict to herself not to make fault, but she is genrous to others.

>> I know she must be very strict to herself not to make a mistake, but she is generous to others.
She is a small girl but her mind is deeper and bigger than anyone. 

>> She is a small girl but her mind is deeper and bigger than anyone else.
I wish I can meet her someday indeed.

>> I wish I could meet her someday.
Her name is Kelly.

>> Correct.

One of the best teacher in Power English!

>> One of the best teachers in Power English!

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