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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
WOW!!!! What can I say? I am so flattered with what I just read. I really don\'t know what to say. Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I guess, I am just kind and patient to people who are also sincere and very pleasant to me. And you are one of those people. Even if we have just met for a short time, I feel so comfortable and at ease talking with you. I really hope that we could meet someday.^^
~Kelly^^
If you could meet a famous celebrity, who would that be and why?
I really want to meet someone who is very kind, very patient and intellectual woman.
>> I really want to meet someone who is very kind, very patient and intellectual.
She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everyday.
>> Correct.
Her voice is so delightful,charming and bright.
>> Correct.
If you hear her voice, you should be happy with her voice.
>> If you hear her voice, you will be happy.
She always tries to listen to others like everybody\'s friend.
>> Correct.
She never has excused or complained of her work and her life.
>> She never has an excuse or complaint of her work and her life.
because she is a positive and open minded person.
>> Correct.
I know she must be very strict to herself not to make fault, but she is genrous to others.
>> I know she must be very strict to herself not to make a mistake, but she is generous to others.
She is a small girl but her mind is deeper and bigger than anyone.
>> She is a small girl but her mind is deeper and bigger than anyone else.
I wish I can meet her someday indeed.
>> I wish I could meet her someday.
Her name is Kelly.
>> Correct.
One of the best teacher in Power English!
>> One of the best teachers in Power English!
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