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Good morning, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for your homework. And THANK YOU again for your present. It\'s an early Christmas gift. kkk. Anyway, smartphones have really made our lives and jobs more convenient and comfortable. Like what you said, we can touch base to our family, friends and clients anytime and anywhere.^^ That\'s the power of technology.~ Have a safe day ahead, ma\'am^^

~Kelly^^

What was your life like before cellphones? And now that smartphones have become part of our lives, what cellphone functions are important to you?
I remember when I bought my first cellphone.

>> Correct.

It was like a miracle because I could call everywhere and everytimes.

>> It was like a miracle because I could call everywhere and every time.

Before cellphones, I used beeper.

>> Before the birth of cellphones, I used a beeper.

When I got the number on beeper, I had to call the number.

>> When I got a number on beeper, I had to call/dial it.

It is just about 20 years ago. 

>> It was like 20 years ago.
But now, we use smartphones like a portable computers.

>> But now, we use smartphones like portable computers. 

To me, the best functions of smartphones is that I can send pictures with tex right away.

>>To me, the best function of smartphones is that I can send pictures with text right away.

I can check and see presicely what my customer wants to buy.

>> Correct.

And also sending message is important.

>> And also, sending a message is important.

To read something is more touchable than to hear something.

>> To read something is more touching than to hear something.

If someone confess his or her love, writting his mind is better than telling to her.
>> If someone confesses his or her love, writting what\'s on his or her mind is better than saying it.
Hi Kelly~~

>> Correct.

You don\'t have to thank.
>> You don\'t have to thank me.

>> You don\'t have to say thank you.

It is my mind about you. 

>> My mind is on you.
I am just worried if you are dissappointed with my present. 

>> I am just worried that you might be disappointed with my present.
To give something to special person is a happiness in my life.

>> To give something to a special person is a happiness in my life.
See you soon!!!

>> Correct.