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2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What is the secret to a happy marriage? Why do so many marriages go wrong? My secret to keep a happy marriage is love and understanding. I've married for 9 years and I still love my husband. Loveing each other is important to keep a marriage. After times.I can hear from other couples that they lived like a roommate or freind. but I don't understand how they keep their marrige without love. From time to time, I get angry or argue with my husband although we love. but I try to understand his mind and think If I were him. I try to listen to his words until he stops talking. and then, I tell my mind. I konw It 's difficult when we are upset. but Do love and try to understand each other. you can have happy marrige. Oh~~ Kelly, My compostion is terrible today. I have many things to say in my head. but It doesn't come out. I just want to say that, If you live with someone who love you, your marrige is successful, If you don't, you'd better divorce and fine love. Life is too short.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your secret to a happy marriage. Now, it\'s no longer a secret. kkk. I will always remember your advice. Life is too short. Continue the love and understanding that you share with your husband. Life is a roller coaster. Arguments and misunderstandings are normal in a relationship. What\'s important is that you understand and respect each others differences. I guess that is true love^^

~Kelly^^

What is the secret to a happy marriage? Why do so many marriages go wrong?
My secret to keep a happy marriage is love and understanding. 

>> Correct.
I\'ve married for 9 years and I still love my husband.

>> I\'ve been married for nine years and I still my husband.
Loveing each other is important to keep a marriage. 

>> Loving each other is important to keep a marriage.

>> or: Love is important in keeping a marriage.
After times. I can hear from other couples that they lived like a roommate or freind.

>> At times, I hear from other couples that they live like roommates or friends.

But I don\'t understand how they keep their marrige without love. 

>> Correct.
From time to time, I get angry or argue with my husband although we love.

>> From time to time, I get angry or argue with my husband although we love each other.

but I try to understand his mind and think If I were him.

>> But I try to understand his opinion and put myself in his shoes.

I try to listen to his words until he stops talking. and then, I tell my mind.

>> I try to listen to what he says until he stops talking. And then, I say what\'s on my mind.  

I konw It \'s difficult when we are upset.

>> Correct.

** know

but Do love and try to understand each other.

>> But we love and understand each each other.

you can have happy marrige. 

>> You can have a happy marriage.
 Oh~~ Kelly, My compostion is terrible today.

>> Correct.

I have many things to say in my head. but It doesn\'t come out.

>> There are many things in my head that I want to share but they come out.

I just want to say that, If you live with someone who love you, your marrige is successful, If you don\'t, you\'d better divorce and fine love. Life is too short.

>> I just want to say that, If you live with someone love you, your marrige is successful, If you don\'t, you\'d better divorce and fine another love. Life is too short.

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