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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
I would definitely love to have a drink with you. I know that you are fun to be with. Maybe, we will talk until the following morning. kkk Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day! See you~
~Kelly^^
How does alcohol change your behavior, personality and face?
I really love drinking with my friends and my husband.
>> Correct.
I am not a heavy drinker but I can drink longe time.
>> I am not a heavy drinker but I can drink for a long time.
When I drink, I am getting more exiting and I speak like a chatter box.
>>When I drink, I become more excited and speak like a chatter box.
Surely, my voice is getting louder.
>> Correct.
I am a kind of amusing person when I drink, therefore I amuse people with funny stories and my humors.
>> Correct.
I know when some people dirnk, their face color turn to red.
>> Correct.
But my face doesn\'t change, but If I am really drunken, I know my eye sights turn to be dim.
>> But my face color doesn\'t change, but If I am really drunken, I know my vision becomes blurred.
I mean, my eyes lose focus.
>> Correct.
I think, for healthy drinking, don\'t let alcohol drink alcohol, drink and enjoy yourself. (Do you understand what I mean?
>> Did you mean: I think, for healthy drinking, don\'t let alcohol gets into your system, drink and enjoy yourself.
(Do you understand what I mean?)
>> Correct.
When people are drunken, they want to drink more and more without conscious, I thingk, that moment is alcohol drinks alcohol)
>> When people are drunken, they want to drink more and more until they become conscious, I think, that is the effect of alcohol)
Hi Kelly~~
>> Correct.
Do you want to drink with me? I will treat you a drink.. Let\'s toast!!! kkk
>> Correct.
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