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2015-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Describe something special you want to buy in the future. What is it? When do you intend to buy it? What makes things to be special to you? It is too difficult to say what I want to buy in the future. Because I like shopping. Frankly speaking. I bought two bottles of whiskey this morning fot the Christmas party. Mayebe, I will buy something again tomorrow. For Christmas present, I have to go to shopping on this weekend. I am thinkg a nice muffler for my husband. But I don't think for me. I prefer to give present to someone special rather than I take gifts. I love to watch when people smiles with my present. Hi~~ Kelly~~ Did you unpack the box? I am little bit shy and nervous..KKK

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am Sue!

You really have a kind heart. You would rather give than receive presents. And speaking of presents, I already opened your package. I am very happy and thankful for your presents. They are all lovely. I love everything inside the box. You are so sweet. I really appreciate your kindness. THANK YOU so much and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

~Kelly^^

Describe something special you want to buy in the future. What is it? When do you intend to buy it? What makes things to be special to you?
It is too difficult to say what I want to buy in the future.

>> Correct.

Because I like shopping.

>> Correct.

Frankly speaking. I bought two bottles of whiskey this morning fot the Christmas party.

>> Frankly speaking, I bought two bottles of whiskey this morning for the Christmas party.

Mayebe, I will buy something again tomorrow.

>> Maybe, I will buy something again tomorrow.
For Christmas present, I have to go to shopping on this weekend.

>> For Christmas presents, I have to go shopping this weekend.

I am thinkg a nice muffler for my husband.

>> I am thinking of giving my husband a nice muffler.

But I don\'t think for me.

>> But I don\'t think of buying something for me.

I prefer to give present to someone special rather than I take gifts.

>> prefer to give  a present to someone special rather than receiving gifts.
I love to watch when people smiles with my present.
>> 
I love to watch when people smile with my present.
Hi~~ Kelly~~

>> Correct.
Did you unpack the box?

>> Correct.

I am little bit shy and nervous..KKK

>> I am a little shy and nervous. kkk

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