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2015-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How many pets have you had? What animal do you think makes the best pet? I have one dog, her name is Nana. She was born in March,2012. She is a very acitive and smart dog. I just only have had dog as my pet. I don't have any antipathy about a pet but I don't like hariless and legless creatures such as snake, frog, warm, elegator, all of amphibia. I don't know why I don't like them but I don't want to see them. Many people have cats as theri pet. In Korea, We think a dog is a faithful and devoted animal.But a cat consider his owner as a maid giving his dish. I prefer a dog to a cat. Hi Kelly~~ I am so sorry to call you Jane~~ I lost my mind in this moring because of works.kkk I hope you understand me with a deep mind. Anyway I watched Utube letter to me. I was so happy to hear your voice with your video. I don't need to watch your picture anymore. I memorize your appearance in my brain, so I can recall your image when we talk together. Oh I forgot to send you my picture.kkk

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for your homework. Please say hi to Nana for me. Anyway, no worries about a while ago. Sometimes, when we are too occupied with work, we just lost track of a lot of things. Thank you for watching my video. I hope you liked it. and I can\'t wait for your picture... please send me if you have spare time.. See you~

~Kelly^^

How many pets have you had? What animal do you think makes the best pet?
I have one dog, her name is Nana.

>> Correct.

She was born in March,2012.

>> She was born on March,2012.

She is a very active and smart dog.

>> Correct.

I just only have had dog as my pet.

>> I have had a dog only as my pet.

I don\'t have any antipathy about a pet but I don\'t like hariless and legless creatures such as snake, frog, warm, elegator, all of amphibia.

>> I don\'t have any antipathy about a pet but I don\'t like hairless and legless creatures such as snakes, frogs, worms, alligators, and all amphibians.

I don\'t know why I don\'t like them but I don\'t want to see them.

>> Correct.

Many people have cats as theri pet.

>> Many people have cats as their pet.

In Korea, We think a dog is a faithful and devoted animal.

>> In Korea, we think of a dog is a faithful and a devoted animal.

But a cat consider his owner as a maid giving his dish.

>> But a cat considers his owner as a maid giving his dish.

I prefer a dog to a cat.

>> Correct.
Hi Kelly~~

>> Correct.

I am so sorry to call you Jane~~

>> Correct.

I lost my mind in this moring because of works. kkk

>> I lost my mind in this morning because of work. kkk

I hope you understand me with a deep mind.

>> Correct.

Anyway I watched Utube letter to me.

>> Anyway I watched your You tube video for me.

I was so happy to hear your voice with your video.

>> Correct.

I don\'t need to watch your picture anymore.

>> Correct.

I memorize your appearance in my brain, so I can recall your image when we talk together.

>> I memorized your appearance in my brain, so I can recall your image when we talk.

Oh I forgot to send you my picture.kkk

>> Correct.


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