home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. Please say hi to Nana for me. Anyway, no worries about a while ago. Sometimes, when we are too occupied with work, we just lost track of a lot of things. Thank you for watching my video. I hope you liked it. and I can\'t wait for your picture... please send me if you have spare time.. See you~
~Kelly^^
How many pets have you had? What animal do you think makes the best pet?
I have one dog, her name is Nana.
>> Correct.
She was born in March,2012.
>> She was born on March,2012.
She is a very active and smart dog.
>> Correct.
I just only have had dog as my pet.
>> I have had a dog only as my pet.
I don\'t have any antipathy about a pet but I don\'t like hariless and legless creatures such as snake, frog, warm, elegator, all of amphibia.
>> I don\'t have any antipathy about a pet but I don\'t like hairless and legless creatures such as snakes, frogs, worms, alligators, and all amphibians.
I don\'t know why I don\'t like them but I don\'t want to see them.
>> Correct.
Many people have cats as theri pet.
>> Many people have cats as their pet.
In Korea, We think a dog is a faithful and devoted animal.
>> In Korea, we think of a dog is a faithful and a devoted animal.
But a cat consider his owner as a maid giving his dish.
>> But a cat considers his owner as a maid giving his dish.
I prefer a dog to a cat.
>> Correct.
Hi Kelly~~
>> Correct.
I am so sorry to call you Jane~~
>> Correct.
I lost my mind in this moring because of works. kkk
>> I lost my mind in this morning because of work. kkk
I hope you understand me with a deep mind.
>> Correct.
Anyway I watched Utube letter to me.
>> Anyway I watched your You tube video for me.
I was so happy to hear your voice with your video.
>> Correct.
I don\'t need to watch your picture anymore.
>> Correct.
I memorize your appearance in my brain, so I can recall your image when we talk together.
>> I memorized your appearance in my brain, so I can recall your image when we talk.
Oh I forgot to send you my picture.kkk
>> Correct.
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