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What is your definition of beauty? Would you consider having cosmetic surgery?
It is very difficult to say what is beauty. 

>> It is very difficult to say what beauty is. 
Generally, beauty can divide inside and outside. 

>> Generally, there are two types of beauty-  inner beauty and outer beauty. 
I consider that inside beauty is more important.

>> I consider inside beauty as more important.
Even if I meet Brad Pitt, I will not think he is beauty if he dosen\'t have charms. 

>> Even if I meet Brad Pitt, I will not think that he is beautiful/handsome if he doesn\'t have charms. 
I believe that beauty is only skin deep.

>> Correct.
 When I meet someone, I try to see their charm and atrraction.

>> When I meet someone, I try to look at their charm and attraction.

If they are charming, their appearance will not disturb judging them by me.

>> If they are charming, they will not receive any judgment from me.

>> If they are charming, I will not judge their appearance.
But If I have to choose to one person in the same condition( I mean both are attractive), I might meet beautiful and hansome person. 

>> But if I have to choose one person with the same physical characteristics (I mean both are attractive), I might meet a beautiful and handsome person. 

I am very positive about cosmetic surgery.

>> Correct.

If I can make time for a month, I really want to get cosmetic surgery. 

>> Correct.
I call plastic surgery is a kind of mental surgery. 

>> I call plastic surgery as a kind of mental surgery. 
If you are not satisfied with your nose or eyes whenever you watch mirror, 

>> If you are not satisfied with your nose or eyes whenever you watch yourself in the mirror, 
Save money and get surgery. 

>> Save money and get a surgery. 
 You will be more confident with your appearance though nobody recognize.

>>  You will be more confident with your appearance though nobody recognizes.