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Good day, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your insight and experience about communication and the use of smartphones. Nowadays, the communication system is well-developed  so we can communicate easily to everybody. That is why it has disadvantages also because I think that we lost our personal time already. But overall, you are right, it made us closer to people because we can speak with them anytime. Anyway, have a great day and good luck to all your activities today. Take care on your way to work.~

~Kelly^^

How many communication changing between people? How have smart phones changed communication?
When I was young, I usually wrote letters when I want to say something to my friends. 

>> When I was young, I usually wrote letters when I wanted to say something to my friends. 
After that time, I called and talked with my friends all night.

>> Correct.

surley, my parents scolded me because of the phone bill. 

>> Surely, my parents scolded me because of the phone bill. 
Sometimes, I missed that time.

>> Correct.

specially, when I get a massage or call from people whom I do\'t want tp answer. 

>> Especially, when I get a message or call from people whom I do\'t want to talk answer. 
And also, I have to bring my smart phones whereever and whenever I go although I don\'t want to communicate. 

>> Correct.
People don\'t write a letter anymore therefore, they have terrible handwritting.
>> People don\'t write a letter anymore because they have terrible handwriting.
With smart phones, we can get close and communicate with people fast. 

>> Correct.
If I want to say someting to others, we can send a massage in a minute without considering the other side. 

>> Correct. 
We make new words when we send a message such as,U. HAND, CU and so on.

>> Correct.
I am worried if we destroy our beautiful words.

>> I am worried that we are ruining the meaning of these beautiful words.
But Every words has changed becasue words also have a life. 

>> But every word has changed becasue words also have a life.   

Oh~~ It\'s 1000 words

>> Correct.