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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
Thank you for the compliment. I am flattered again. Anyway, I am just grateful I met you. I hope to study with you forever. kkk
Anyway, happy New Year!!!!
~Kelly
Thank you Kelly~~
>> Correct.
With your effort, I have had happy 10 minutes everyday for two monthes.
>> With your effort, I have had a happy 10 minutes everyday for two months.
You were not only a teacher but also a good friends.
>> You were not only a teacher but also a good friend.
I could talk about my daily life and I could laugh out because of you.
>> Correct.
When I studied English before I met you. I felt tiredenss to whip myself to learn English.
>> When I studied English before I met you I felt tired to whip myself to learn English.
But after I met you, I can enjoy speaking and learning Englsih without any under a obsession.
>> But after I met you, I could enjoy speaking and learning Englsih without any under a obsession.
I am a kind of perfectionist. kkk
>> Correct.
You have a power to make people comfortable and inteimate.
>> You have the power to make people feel comfortable and intimate.
I am sure that you will be a great teacher soon.
>> Correct.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
Happy New Year and have a wonderful New year eve.!!
>> Happy New Year and have a wonderful New year\'s eve.!!
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