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2015-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Thank you Kelly~~ With your effort, I have had happy 10 minutes everyday for two monthes. You were not only a teacher but also a good friends. I could talk about my daily life and I could laugh out because of you. When I studied English before I met you. I felt tiredenss to whip myself to learn English. But after I met you, I can enjoy speaking and learning Englsih without any under a obsession. I am a kind of perfectionist.kkk You have a power to make people comfortable and inteimate. I am sure that you will be a great teacher soon. Thank you. Happy New Year and have a wonderful New year eve.!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for the compliment. I am flattered again. Anyway, I am just grateful I met you. I hope to study with you forever. kkk

Anyway, happy New Year!!!!

~Kelly

Thank you Kelly~~

>> Correct.
With your effort, I have had happy 10 minutes everyday for two monthes.

>> With your effort, I have had a happy 10 minutes everyday for two months.
You were not only a teacher but also a good friends.

>> You were not only a teacher but also a good friend.
I could talk about my daily life and I could laugh out because of you.
>> Correct.
When I studied English before I met you. I felt tiredenss to whip myself to learn English. 

>> When I studied English before I met you I felt tired to whip myself to learn English.  
But after I met you, I can enjoy speaking and learning Englsih without any under a obsession.

>> But after I met you, I could enjoy speaking and learning Englsih without any under a obsession.

I am a kind of perfectionist. kkk

>> Correct.
You have a power to make people comfortable and inteimate.

>> You have the power to make people feel comfortable and intimate.
I am sure that you will be a great teacher soon.
>> Correct.
Thank you. 

>> Correct.
 Happy New Year and have a wonderful New year eve.!!

>> Happy New Year and have a wonderful New year\'s eve.!!

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