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2016-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Which do you prefer- city life or country life? why? I don't care where I live, city or country. To me, important thing is who I live with. However, If I have to choose city life or country life, I prefer to live in country. It can mean that I choose loneliness. In city life, there is stress from connection with people, and also, I have to be involved with many group regardless of my will. Even I don't have time to feel lonely or solitude. I know there are many benefits living in a city such as convinient transportation and facilities, The reason, I choose country life is that I can live own my life perfactly without any bothering. I want to live relaxed life with my loving people. I think to live in country, I have to make a lot of money because there is no job. Oh~~ I talk about money again. I feel sad that our life is cotrolled by money. I will buy lottery tickets in this week. yes I will.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thanks for sending this in. Anyway, living in country or the city have benefits and downsides. But if you want to have a simple and quiet life, the country is best for you. Anyway, good luck ma\'am. If you will buy a lottery ticket, I hope that your numbers will win. Let\'s keep our fingers crossed.^^

~Kelly^^

Which do you prefer- city life or country life? why?
I don\'t care where I live, city or country. 

>> I don\'t care where I live, whether in the  city or country. 
To me, important thing is who I live with. 

>> To me, the important thing is who I live with. 
However, If I have to choose city life or country life, I prefer to live in country.

>> However, If I have to choose between city life or country life, I prefer to live in country.

It can mean that I choose loneliness. 

>> Correct.
In city life, there is stress from connection with people, and also, I have to be involved with many group regardless of my will. 

>> In city life, there is stress when connecting with people, and also, I have to be involved with many groups regardless of my will. 
Even I don\'t have time to feel lonely or solitude.

>> Also, I don\'t even have time to feel lonely or solitude.

I know there are many benefits living in a city such as convinient transportation and facilities, 

>> I know there are many benefits living in a city such as convenient transportation and facilities.
The reason, I choose country life is that I can live own my life perfactly without any bothering.

>> The reason why I choose country life is that I can live own my life perfactly without being bothered by anyone.

I want to live relaxed life with my loving people.

>> Correct.

I think to live in country, I have to make a lot of money because there is no job.

>> I think in order to live in country, I have to make a lot of money because there is no job opportunity there.
 Oh~~ I talk about money again. I feel sad that our life is cotrolled by money.

>> Correct.
 I will buy lottery tickets in this week. yes I will.

>> Correct.

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