home work

Good morning Ma\'am [이름]!

It is indeed a challenge to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time. But like what you said, through team work and cooperation, you can achieve it. Anyway, good luck on your activities today. It is another Monday~ May you have a pleasant day!

~Kelly^^

Do you think it\'s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time?
I think that It\'s possible but it must be very difficult. 

>> Correct.
I don\'t have children but I have many friends having children. 

>> Correct.

>> or: I don\'t have children but I have many friends who have children.
When I look at them, They are having hard time always to bring up children. 

>> When I look at them, they are having a hard time to bring up their children. 

>> When I look at them, they always have a hard time to bring up their children. 
Especially these days, to raise children is very difficult and hard working for their parents because of educcation. 

>> Especially these days, to raise children is very difficult so parents work very hard for their education.
Parents bring their children private institute 3 or 4 times a day. 

>> Parents bring their children to a private institute 3 or 4 times a day. 
That is why Korean women stop working when they give birth. 

>> Correct.
We call \'super mam\' who work and also bring up their children. 

>> We call those mothers who work and raise their children at the same time \"super mom\"
If I want to have a happy family and a successful career. the memeber of family should help house work together and considerate each other. 

>> In order to have a happy family and a successful career, my family members should help each other in doing house work and be considerate to each other.  
Without sacrifice of family member, we cannot achieve to a happy family and a successful career.
>> Without the sacrifice of each family member, we cannot achieve a happy family and a successful career.