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2016-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Wirte your insight tio this question : Is fashion important? Absolutely, Yes. I love fashion especially, clothes. I try to be a fashionable always. therefore I am always pressed for time every morning to choose my clothes. I look for fashion trend every season of the year and try to match with my clothes and my style. I don't fallow every trend but try to make harmony with my style. I like chick and natural style for daily look. I wear skinny leather jean and big size sweater and over size jacket. For special occastion, I wear black shris with brown sleeveless one-piece and a big poncho with a fox-fur muffler wearing leather brown high hill. When I wear clothes, I care of colors and textures. Oh~~ I really love fashion. I write this compositon without any hesitation. Hi~~ Kelly~ I hope you like fation too. I wish I go shopping with you someday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

As I read your composition, I could really feel your love for fashion. Just like you, I also love fashion. I love clothes, shoes, bags and wallets. I also wish that we could go shopping together. That would be very fun I think.^^

~Kelly^^

Write your insight to this question : Is fashion important?
Absolutely, Yes.

>> Correct.
 I love fashion especially, clothes.

>> Correct.
I try to be a fashionable always.

>> Correct.

therefore I am always pressed for time every morning to choose my clothes.

>> Correct.
I look for fashion trend every season of the year and try to match with my clothes and my style. 

>> Correct.
I don\'t fallow every trend but try to make harmony with my style. 

>> I don\'t follow every trend but I try to make harmony with my style. 
I like chick and natural style for daily look.

>> Correct.

I wear skinny leather jean and big size sweater and over size jacket. 

>> I wear skinny leather jeans, big size sweaters and over sized jackets. 
For special occastion, I wear black shris with brown sleeveless one-piece and a big poncho with a fox-fur muffler wearing leather brown high hill. 

>> For special occasions, I wear black skirt with brown sleeveless one-piece and a big poncho with a fox-fur muffler and leather brown high heel shoes. 
When I wear clothes, I care of colors and textures. 

>> When I wear clothes, I am very particular with colors and textures.
Oh~~ I really love fashion. I write this compositon without any hesitation.

>> Correct.
Hi~~ Kelly~ 

>> Correct.
 I hope you like fation too.

>> I hope you like fashion, too.

I wish I go shopping with you someday.

>> I wish I can go shopping with you someday.  

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