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2016-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What are some of the most imoortant customs of your country? Do you follow all of your country's traditional customs? To respect the elderly is most important customs in Korea. We are responsible for taking care of the elderly for their sacrifice. We are educated this customs when we can talk. It's is natural thing that we take care of our parents when they retire. Still, many eldest child has to live their parents after their marrige. Therfore, Some women don't want to get married with eldest man in his family. Recently the customs has changed. They have to live far from their parents because of work or school. There are many poeple going to meet their parents on special holidays such as Chuseok, or Seolnal. We call this ' Big movement of nation. There are full of cars on the highway on special holidays and It takes twice or tripple times more compared to ordinaly weekend. But I know that everyone is waiting that day because they can meet their loving family.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday, Ma\'am [이름]!

How is your morning? I hope that you are having a good start of the day. Anyway, thank you for sending this in and for sharing Korea customs and traditions. Let us hope that the young generation will also preserve these great practices in your country so that they will also pass it on to the next generation.^^ Have a wonderful day and stay safe always.~

~Kelly^^

What are some of the most important customs of your country? Do you follow all of your country\'s traditional customs?
To respect the elderly is most important customs in Korea. 

>>To respect the elderly is the most important customs in Korea. 
We are responsible for taking care of the elderly for their sacrifice. 

>> We are responsible for taking care of the elderly for their sacrifices.  
We are educated this customs when we can talk.

>> We were taught to follow this custom.
It\'s is natural thing that we take care of our parents when they retire.

>> It is a natural thing for us to take care of our parents when they retire.
Still, many eldest child has to live their parents after their marrige.

>> Still, many eldest children have to live with their parents after marriage.
Therfore, Some women don\'t want to get married with eldest man in his family.

>>Therefore, some women don\'t want to get married with an eldest son.
Recently the customs has changed. 

>> Recently this custom has changed. 
They have to live far from their parents because of work or school.

>> Correct.
There are many poeple going to meet their parents on special holidays such as Chuseok, or Seolnal. 

>> There are many people who meet their parents on special holidays such as Chuseok, or Seolnal. 

We call this \' Big movement of nation. 

>> We call this \"big movement of nation.\" 
There are full of cars on the highway on special holidays and It takes twice or tripple times more compared to ordinaly weekend.

>> There are a lot of cars on the highway on special holidays;  two or three times more compared to ordinary weekends.
 But I know that everyone is waiting that day because they can meet their loving family.

>> But I know that everyone is waiting for that day because they can meet their loving family.

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