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2016-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Are you someone who likes change? What is the most positive change you have experienced in your life? I have been changed and I am changing still in anyway. I am not afraid of change something. I change my style oftenly and I try to change myself in a good way. What is the most positive change I have expeienced in mylife? well, It's a too difficult question because no one can change suddenly. If we want to change our habbit or behavior, It takes time to change. Hi Kell~~ I am so sorry for today's homework. It does not ring a bell. Oh my God!!! I got your card and present now. How nice you are. Thank you so much for your hand writting card and a cute mobile phone holder. ( it takes a little time to read your hand writting kkkk) Thank you Kelly!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework and for putting an effort in answering the question. Anyway, I am soooo happy you got the greeting card already. You are always welcome ma\'am. Please accept it as a simple token of my appreciation within.^^

~Kelly^^

Are you someone who likes change? What is the most positive change you have experienced in your life?
I have been changed and I am changing still in anyway. 

>> Correct.
I am not afraid of change something.

>> I am not afraid of changing something.

I change my style oftenly and I try to change myself in a good way. 

>> I change my style often and I try to change myself in a good way.  


What is the most positive change I have expeienced in my life?

>> Correct.

well, It\'s a too difficult question because no one can change suddenly.

>> Correct.

If we want to change our habbit or behavior, It takes time to change.
>>
If we want to change our habit or behavior, it will take time.
Hi Kell~~

>> Correct.
I am so sorry for today\'s homework.

>> Correct.

It does not ring a bell.

>> Correct.

Oh my God!!! I got your card and present now.

>> Correct.

How nice you are.

>> Correct.

Thank you so much for your hand writting card and a cute mobile phone holder.

>> Correct.

***writing

( it takes a little time to read your hand writting kkkk)

>> Correct.
Thank you Kelly!!!

>> Correct.


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