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Hi there, Ma\'am [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework and for putting an effort in answering the question. Anyway, I am soooo happy you got the greeting card already. You are always welcome ma\'am. Please accept it as a simple token of my appreciation within.^^
~Kelly^^
Are you someone who likes change? What is the most positive change you have experienced in your life?
I have been changed and I am changing still in anyway.
>> Correct.
I am not afraid of change something.
>> I am not afraid of changing something.
I change my style oftenly and I try to change myself in a good way.
>> I change my style often and I try to change myself in a good way.
What is the most positive change I have expeienced in my life?
>> Correct.
well, It\'s a too difficult question because no one can change suddenly.
>> Correct.
If we want to change our habbit or behavior, It takes time to change.
>> If we want to change our habit or behavior, it will take time.
Hi Kell~~
>> Correct.
I am so sorry for today\'s homework.
>> Correct.
It does not ring a bell.
>> Correct.
Oh my God!!! I got your card and present now.
>> Correct.
How nice you are.
>> Correct.
Thank you so much for your hand writting card and a cute mobile phone holder.
>> Correct.
***writing
( it takes a little time to read your hand writting kkkk)
>> Correct.
Thank you Kelly!!!
>> Correct.
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