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At first, I appreciate your sinsere advice of my english. I'm really impressed by you. You are the best teacher I ever met. Actully you are my first english teacher. kk However, I really really like you as a teacher.
(15.01.18 Homework)
1. I think speedy is to do something fast and, "to go without food" is to endure not having food.
2. I don't know how can I explain "someone who likes you". U want me to separate this sentence into two parts? If you so, my answer is " There is a man. and the man likes me". And, a device to stir up air is the fan. To be honest, I don't know exact meaning of "stir up".
3. "Did fall " is a emphasizing the past form of "fall" And, To Cut down a tree" is logging tree.
4. "A type of cloth" is the material by which a cloth is made.
I don't know why you wanted me to answer the questions It is just a curiosity. Never mind. Do you want me to learn synonym? If not, What is your purpose of that questions.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
A WONDROUS Wednesday to you! ^.^
Happy midweek! ^^
First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for continuously making you compositions.
You give me joy whenever you write them.
Anyway, finally, I am done checking your composition.
Please see the corrections and suggestions below in relation to your writing.
Happy reading! ^^,
See you in class! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
At first, I appreciate your sinsere advice of my english.
>> First, I appreciate your sincere advice on my English.
>> BETTER: First, I would like to say that I appreciate your sincere advice on my English.
1. AT FIRST means at the beginning or in the initial stage, so you just appreciate what I did before not now.
2. SPELLING: SINSERE should be SINCERE.
3. The E in ENGLISH should always be a big letter.
I\'m really impressed by you.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'m really impressed with the way you corrected my composition.
You are the best teacher I ever met.
>> CORRECT!
>> BETTER: You are the best teacher I\'ve ever met.
Actully you are my first english teacher. kk
>> Actually, you are my first English teacher. Kk!
4. SPELLING: ACTULLY should be ACTUALLY.
5. See number 3.
6. It is better to make kk to Kk!
However, I really really like you as a teacher.>> However, I really like you as a teacher.
7. Grammatically speaking, REALLY REALLY is not correct.(15.01.18 Homework)>> (16.01.18 Homework)
8. It is already 2016 not 2015. ^^
1. I think speedy is to do something fast and, \"to go without food\" is to endure not having food. >> I think \"speedy\" is happening fast, and \"to go without food\" is to endure not having food.
>> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fast\" means speedy and also to go without food.
9. Since you already used quotations marks for TO GO WITHOUT FOOD, you should also use them for SPEEDY.2. I don\'t know how can I explain \"someone who likes you\".
>> I don\'t know how I can explain \"someone who likes you.\"
>> OR: I don\'t know how to explain \"someone who likes you.\"
10. QUESTION: How can I explain it? >>> How + can + subject + base-verb + object?
STATEMENT: I know how I can explain it. >>> ... how + subject + can + base-verb + object.
U want me to separate this sentence into two parts?
>> Do you want to separate this sentence into two parts?
>> OR: Do you want me to separate this sentence into two parts?
11. SPELLING: U should be YOU.
12. Your question is for speaking grammar is correct, but for writing grammar, it is wrong.
13. To answer your question, I don\'t want you to separate the sentence into two. I want you to find the word that has the meaning of \"someone who likes you\" and \"to stir up air.\"
If you so, my answer is \" There is a man. and the man likes me\".
>> If you want it so, my answer is \"There is a man, and the man likes me.\"
>> BETTER: If that is what you want me to do, my answer is \"There is a man, and he likes me.\"
14. There should be a verb in the IF-CLAUSE.
15. There should be on space between the open quotation mark and there.
16. The period should be placed before the close quotation mark.
17. It is better not to repeat a word in a sentence. It is better to put only ONE MAN in your sentence.
And, a device to stir up air is the fan.
>> And, a device to stir up air is a fan.
>> OR: Furthermore, a device to stir up air is a fan.
18. Since you are giving a general information, THE FAN should be A FAN.
To be honest, I don\'t know exact meaning of \"stir up\".>> To be honest, I don\'t know the exact meaning of \"stir up.\"
>> OR: To be honest, I don\'t know exactly the meaning of \"stir up.\"
>> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fan\" means someone who likes you and also a device to stir up air.
19. There should be THE between KNOW and MEANING.
20. STIR UP means to put something in motion.3. \"Did fall \" is a emphasizing the past form of \"fall\" And, To Cut down a tree\" is logging tree. >> \"Did fall\" is emphasizing the past form of \"fall,\" and \"to cut down a tree\" is to log a tree.
>> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fell\" means did fall and also to cut down a tree.
21. There should be no space between FALL and the CLOSE QUOTATION MARK.
22. You cannot put an article in the middle of IS and V-ing.
23. The A in AND, the T of TO and the C of cut should be in lowercase letters.
24. TO CUT DOWN A TREE is verb, and LOGGING TREE is noun. Since they don\'t have the same form, TO CUT DOWN A TREE can\'t have LOGGING TREE as its meaning.4. \"A type of cloth\" is the material by which a cloth is made.>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Felt\" means did feel and also a type of cloth.I don\'t know why you wanted me to answer the questions
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I don\'t know why you wanted me to answer these questions.
It is just a curiosity.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am just curious.
Never mind.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Never mind about it.
Do you want me to learn synonym?
>> Do you want me to learn synonyms?
25. SYNONYM should be SYNONYMS.
26. I want you to remember HOMOGRAPHS.
If not, What is your purpose of that questions.
>> If not, what is the purpose of these questions.
>> OR: If not, why did you give this kind of homework.
27. W in WHAT should be a small letter.
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