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2016-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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At first, I appreciate your sinsere advice of my english. I'm really impressed by you. You are the best teacher I ever met. Actully you are my first english teacher. kk However, I really really like you as a teacher. (15.01.18 Homework) 1. I think speedy is to do something fast and, "to go without food" is to endure not having food. 2. I don't know how can I explain "someone who likes you". U want me to separate this sentence into two parts? If you so, my answer is " There is a man. and the man likes me". And, a device to stir up air is the fan. To be honest, I don't know exact meaning of "stir up". 3. "Did fall " is a emphasizing the past form of "fall" And, To Cut down a tree" is logging tree. 4. "A type of cloth" is the material by which a cloth is made. I don't know why you wanted me to answer the questions It is just a curiosity. Never mind. Do you want me to learn synonym? If not, What is your purpose of that questions.

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Dear [Name],   A WONDROUS Wednesday to you! ^.^ Happy midweek! ^^   First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for continuously making you compositions. You give me joy whenever you write them.   Anyway, finally, I am done checking your composition. Please see the corrections and suggestions below in relation to your writing. Happy reading! ^^, See you in class! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     At first, I appreciate your sinsere advice of my english. >> First, I appreciate your sincere advice on my English. >> BETTER: First, I would like to say that I appreciate your sincere advice on my English. 1. AT FIRST means at the beginning or in the initial stage, so you just appreciate what I did before not now. 2. SPELLING: SINSERE should be SINCERE. 3. The E in ENGLISH should always be a big letter. I\'m really impressed by you. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I\'m really impressed with the way you corrected my composition. You are the best teacher I ever met. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: You are the best teacher I\'ve ever met. Actully you are my first english teacher. kk >> Actually, you are my first English teacher. Kk! 4. SPELLING: ACTULLY should be ACTUALLY. 5. See number 3. 6. It is better to make kk to Kk! However, I really really like you as a teacher.>> However, I really like you as a teacher. 7. Grammatically speaking, REALLY REALLY is not correct.(15.01.18 Homework)>> (16.01.18 Homework) 8. It is already 2016 not 2015. ^^ 1. I think speedy is to do something fast and, \"to go without food\" is to endure not having food. >> I think \"speedy\" is happening fast, and \"to go without food\" is to endure not having food. >> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fast\" means speedy and also to go without food. 9. Since you already used quotations marks for TO GO WITHOUT FOOD, you should also use them for SPEEDY.2. I don\'t know how can I explain \"someone who likes you\". >> I don\'t know how I can explain \"someone who likes you.\" >> OR: I don\'t know how to explain \"someone who likes you.\" 10. QUESTION: How can I explain it? >>> How + can + subject + base-verb + object?        STATEMENT: I know how I can explain it. >>> ... how + subject + can + base-verb + object. U want me to separate this sentence into two parts? >> Do you want to separate this sentence into two parts? >> OR: Do you want me to separate this sentence into two parts? 11. SPELLING: U should be YOU. 12. Your question is for speaking grammar is correct, but for writing grammar, it is wrong. 13. To answer your question, I don\'t want you to separate the sentence into two. I want you to find the word that has the meaning of \"someone who likes you\" and \"to stir up air.\" If you so, my answer is \" There is a man. and the man likes me\". >> If you want it so, my answer is \"There is a man, and the man likes me.\" >> BETTER: If that is what you want me to do, my answer is \"There is a man, and he likes me.\" 14. There should be a verb in the IF-CLAUSE. 15. There should be on space between the open quotation mark and there. 16. The period should be placed before the close quotation mark. 17. It is better not to repeat a word in a sentence. It is better to put only ONE MAN in your sentence. And, a device to stir up air is the fan. >> And, a device to stir up air is a fan. >> OR: Furthermore, a device to stir up air is a fan. 18. Since you are giving a general information, THE FAN should be A FAN. To be honest, I don\'t know exact meaning of \"stir up\".>> To be honest, I don\'t know the exact meaning of \"stir up.\" >> OR: To be honest, I don\'t know exactly the meaning of \"stir up.\" >> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fan\" means someone who likes you and also a device to stir up air. 19. There should be THE between KNOW and MEANING. 20. STIR UP means to put something in motion.3. \"Did fall \" is a emphasizing the past form of \"fall\" And, To Cut down a tree\" is logging tree. >> \"Did fall\" is emphasizing the past form of \"fall,\" and \"to cut down a tree\" is to log a tree. >> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Fell\" means did fall and also to cut down a tree. 21. There should be no space between FALL and the CLOSE QUOTATION MARK. 22. You cannot put an article in the middle of IS and V-ing. 23. The A in AND, the T of TO and the C of cut should be in lowercase letters.  24. TO CUT DOWN A TREE is verb, and LOGGING TREE is noun. Since they don\'t have the same form, TO CUT DOWN A TREE can\'t have LOGGING TREE as its meaning.4. \"A type of cloth\" is the material by which a cloth is made.>> CORRECT! >> CORRECT ANSWER: \"Felt\" means did feel and also a type of cloth.I don\'t know why you wanted me to answer the questions >> CORRECT! >> OR: I don\'t know why you wanted me to answer these questions. It is just a curiosity. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am just curious. Never mind. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Never mind about it. Do you want me to learn synonym? >> Do you want me to learn synonyms? 25. SYNONYM should be SYNONYMS. 26. I want you to remember HOMOGRAPHS. If not, What is your purpose of that questions. >> If not, what is the purpose of these questions. >> OR: If not, why did you give this kind of homework. 27. W in WHAT should be a small letter.

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