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2016-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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My son and I went to toy shop in Great Easten Mall on last Saturday. There are so many kinds of toys that lego, cars, robot.... and so on So very big. [There are very big] My son was very happy that just look around. He bought a small lego. and then we ate local food in local restaurant and went home. He went to bed very late. It is about 12:00 pm. Because He made a lego for 3 hours. My son completed the lego.

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Happy Monday, Yasmine! ^^   Thank you for answering today\'s homework! You did a great job! :) See you!!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   My son and I went to toy shop in Great Easten Mall on last Saturday. >> My son and I went to a toy shop in Great Easten Mall last Saturday.There are so many kinds of toys that lego, cars, robot.... and so on So very big. >> There were many kinds of toys like Lego, cars, robots, etc. [There are very big] >> They were huge.My son was very happy that just look around. >> My son was very happy just by looking around.He bought a small lego. >> He bought a small Lego. and then we ate local food in local restaurant and went home.>> We ate in a local restaurant and went home.He went to bed very late. >> Correct! It is about 12:00 pm. >> We slept at 12 AM.Because He made a lego for 3 hours. >> It\'s because he played with his Lego for 3 hours.My son completed the lego. >> My son built something out of the Lego.  

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