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My son and I went to toy shop in Great Easten Mall on last Saturday.
There are so many kinds of toys that lego, cars, robot.... and so on So very big.
[There are very big]
My son was very happy that just look around.
He bought a small lego. and then
we ate local food in local restaurant and went home.
He went to bed very late. It is about 12:00 pm.
Because He made a lego for 3 hours.
My son completed the lego.
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My son and I went to toy shop in Great Easten Mall on last Saturday.
>> My son and I went to a toy shop in Great Easten Mall last Saturday.There are so many kinds of toys that lego, cars, robot.... and so on So very big.
>> There were many kinds of toys like Lego, cars, robots, etc. [There are very big]
>> They were huge.My son was very happy that just look around.
>> My son was very happy just by looking around.He bought a small lego.
>> He bought a small Lego.
and then we ate local food in local restaurant and went home.>> We ate in a local restaurant and went home.He went to bed very late.
>> Correct!
It is about 12:00 pm.
>> We slept at 12 AM.Because He made a lego for 3 hours.
>> It\'s because he played with his Lego for 3 hours.My son completed the lego.
>> My son built something out of the Lego.
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