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Dear [Name],

Howdy, my friend! ^.^

Thank you for sharing some information about your family! ^^

Now, it is my turn.

We are a family of six.

There are three princesses and one prince.

Hahaha! ^^

I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

I am the second child in my family.

I am close to my family, especially to my mother.

I was very close to my father before, but something happened.

Anyway, we like being together.

We like eating a lot.

Hahaha! ^^,

That\'s all for now! ^^

Don\'t forget to check your composition again.

See you in a bit! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

My family are 4 of us.

>> We are 4 in our family.

>> OR: There are 4 members in our family.

My father worked for a bank.
>> CORRECT!

But for now, he is giving a help to my mother.
>> But for now, he is helping my mother.

I think he is trying to earn money by stocks.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I think he is trying to earn money through stocks.

I\'ve watch he wakes up early and glances on smartphone.
>> I\'ve watched him waking up early and glancing on his smartphone.

He likes an exercise especially running and doing a golf.
>> He likes exercising, especially running and playing golf.

My mother is still working for an insurance company.

>> CORRECT!

She likes to work.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: She likes working.

And, She is smart.

>> And, she is smart.

>> OR: And, she is intelligent.

She has never given up to make for living.
>> She has never given up to make for a living.

She really likes to watch drama on weekends.

>> She really likes to watch dramas on weekends.

>> BETTER: She really likes watching dramas on weekends.

It\'s her favorite.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: It\'s what she really likes.

I have only one broher.

>> I have only one brother.

He is a student and studies in Sydney Uni.

>> He is a student and studies at the University of Sydney.

>> OR: He is a student and studies at a Sydney university.

He has been over 5 years in Austrailia.
>> He has been over 5 years in Australia.

I was very close with my brother.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I had a good relationship with my brother.

I always played with him.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: We always had time to play together.

We did a gun survival game, which plays with imitated gun, with his friends.

>> We did a gun survival game, which plays with imitated guns with his friends.

I remember I shot his friend\'s eye.

>> CORRECT!

The guy had a bruise on his eye.

>> CORRECT!

I was very sorry for it.
>> CORRECT!

After the time, I didn\'t play the game any more.
>> After that time, I didn\'t play the game anymore.

The last human is me.

>> The last human standing was me.

I\'m 24 years old and work in military service.
>> I\'m 24 years old and work in the military service.

I supposed to imigrate to Norway.

>> I supposed to immigrate to Norway.

>> OR: I believe I can immigrate to Norway.

I hope to be trilingual.

>> CORRECT!