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Dear [Name],

A positively exploding Friday for you! ^.^

I think you have a lot of hobbies nowadays. That is good. You can be healthier. I envy you. I hope I can also do a lot of things these day. I just watch movies. Furthermore, it is not a healthy hobby, because it might make my eyes weak. Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, I hope I can do more.

By the way, thank you for sharing some information about the things that you like doing these days.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

Cheers! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I don\'t have a hobby which has been passed down in my familly.

>> I don\'t have a hobby which has been passed down in my family.

>> OR: There aren\'t any hobby which have been passed down in my family.

>> OR: My family don\'t have hobbies that have been passed down in us.

So I will say about my hobbies!

>> So, I will say some things about my hobbies!

>> OR: Therefore, I will tell you about my hobbies!

When I have free time, I usually do watching tv, cycling, swimming and studying.

>> When I have free time, I usually do watching TV, cycling, swimming and studying.

>> OR: When I have free time, I usually watch TV, ride bicycle, swim and study.

Nowadays, I have been doing many hobbies.

>> Nowadays, I do many hobbies.

I have got interested with an instrument, specifically it\'s a korean traditional instrument.

>> I have been interested in an instrument, specially because it\'s a Korean traditional instrument.

I don\' t know how to play it, but I\'m getting to know it.

>> CORRECT!

I have a music lesson once a week on every saturday.

>> I have a music lesson once a week, and that is every Saturday.

>> OR: I have a music lesson every Saturday.

>> OR: I have a music class on Saturdays.

It\'s hard to learn about reading scales, rythm and beats.

>> It\'s hard to learn about reading scales, rhythms and beats.

>> OR: It\'s hard to learn how to read scales, rhythms and beats.

But, having studied with a nice teacher, I will learn featly.

>> CORRECT!

And then, I like swimming.

>> CORRECT!

I didn\'t know if swimming would be hard.

>> CORRECT!

When I do it, I feel being lack of oxygen.

>> When I do it, I feel lack of oxygen.

>> OR: When I swim, I feel like I am lacking oxygen.

I guess I have bad lungs.

>> I guess I have bad lungs.

But, first and foremost, It must be good for my health.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: However, first and foremost, it must be good for my health.

I will keep it do until the winter comes.

>> I will keep doing it until the winter comes.

Cheers!

>> CORRECT!