Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
A lovely Tuesday night to you! ^.^
Thank you for doing your homework! ^^ Thank you also for sharing something about your plans! ^^, However, I have some questions, because I became curious about what you wrote on your composition. What is OCJP exam?
Anyway, that\'s all for now.
Don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions I placed below.
Happy reading! ^^
See you very soon! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Yesterday I went to bed at 2 am.
>> Yesterday, I went to bed at 2 am.
For now, it\'s hard to open my eyes.
>> For now, it\'s hard to open my eyes.
I\'m struggling with it.
>> CORRECT!
I studied in Hollys cafe yesterday.
>> I studied in Hollys Coffee yesterday.
It situated in Jong Ro.
>> It is situated in Jongro.
It takes me an half hour from my home.
>> It takes me a half hour to get there from my home.
I arrived there around 12:00.
>> I arrived there around noon.
>> OR: I arrived there around 12:00 pm.
Having eaten bruch at 11, I did\'t be hungry for a long time.
>> Having eaten brunch at 11 am, I didn\'t feel hungry for a long time.
The place has 4 floors.
>> CORRECT!
3rd to 4th floor is a room for studying .
>> 3rd and 4th floors have rooms for studying.
So, many desks lied there.
>> So, many desks are placed there.
>> OR: Therefore, many desks are placed there.
I stayed there near 10 hours.
>> I stayed there for almost 10 hours.
The atmosphere keep me study.
>> The atmosphere kept me to study.
>> OR: The atmosphere encouraged me to study.
I\'m preparing for OCJP exam.
>> I\'m preparing for OCJP exam.
If I get it, I would make my own site.
>> If I get it, I will make my own site.
Thinking to have my own site makes my heart flutter.
>> CORRECT!
Actually, I supposed to get it in October, but it was hard to study in time.
>> Actually, I supposed to get it in October, but it was hard to study at that time.
I\'m about to achieve it before passing this year.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'m about to achieve it before graduating this year.
And then, I will have a trip to Cebu.
>> CORRECT!
Round tirp-tickets  costs 400,000 on winter.
>> A round-trip ticket costs 400,000 in winter.
But, a friend of mine payed only a half of it.
>> CORRECT!
By my friend\'s saying, It should be cheaper, because this friend suffered the price proplem as well.
>> By what my friend told me, it should be cheaper, because he suffered the price problem as well.
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