Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
A wondrous Wednesday to you! ^.^
Thank you for informing me of what happened to you why you didn\'t attend our class last night! ^^ Thank you also for telling me an important thing. What is that important thing? It is about calling your home. Don\'t you worry. ^^, I won\'t call your telephone number again, but cam I call your mobile number still? By the way, I have a Kakao Talk app, but I don\'t open it when I am at work. Therefore, it is really better for you to call our Korean managers or check your Power English student page for you to put our class on hold.
Anyway, don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions I placed below for you to check your sentences.
Anyhow, have a great day ahead! ^^ See you in class! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: Thanks a lot for doing your homework! ^.^
Sorry... I was sleeping...TT
>> I am sorry. I was sleeping.
Please don\'t call my home at night...!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Please don\'t call my home at night.
>> OR: Please don\'t call my home at night!
My parents was having a sleep kkkk
>> My parents are asleep. Kkkk!
Do you have the kakao talk app??
>> Do you have the Kakao Talk app?
If so, I can send you when I can\'t attand a class.
>> If so, I can send you a message when I can\'t attend a class.
How much does your neighborhood define who you are?
In Korea we are hardly ever close with our neighborhood.
>> In Korea, we hardly get close with our neighbors.
We don\'t talk much in an elevator and a hall.
>> We don\'t talk much when we meet in the elevator or at the hall.
Even I don\'t know people who live in downstair and upstair.
>> I don\'t even know the people who live on the other floors of the apartment building where we live.
Maybe, many years ago, when we didn\'t have much an apartment we used to have a good relationship and talked alot with a neighborhood.
>> Maybe, many years ago, when we didn\'t have much apartments, we used to have good relationships and talk a lot with our neighbors.
Nowadays, I\'ve watched people fight with floor by floor on News, because they hated being bothered of noisy from upstair.
>> Nowadays, I see people fight on floor to floor on the news, because they hate being bothered by the noise coming from their neighbors who live on the floor above them.
I\'ve suffered the noisy from upstair as well.
>> I\'ve suffered the same noise from upstairs as well.
It\'s really bad.
>> CORRECT!
I couldn\'t sleep.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I couldn\'t fall asleep.
That was what there\'s a club inside of the room.
>> It was like there\'s a club inside their room.
I went to there to deal with it, but nobody replied on the bell.
>> I went there to deal with it, but nobody replied on the bell.
I was so sad for being ignored.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I was so upset for I was ignored.
If I live in countryside, I will get along with neighbors.
>> If I live in the countryside, I will get along with my neighbors.
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