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What's the best advice you've gotten? Of course, I've got countless teachings and advices. I think Those have helped recent my life. While I was preparing to get into university, My father presented me famous saying binder. It had many good sayings. I read one saying a day through the year. I used to rip and attach some impressive saying page on the table. It must encourage me. Even I've heard many teaching, but my brain has been simple. I like sayings like to live what I want. Steven Jobs said "If today were the last day of your life, would you want to do what tou are about to do today?". My answer was no. So, I changed my attitude on my life. I used to be hot tempered person and try to go fast on everthing. But, I'm trying to change my personality and decided to immigrate a place where everone live slow life.

Dear [Name],   A happy Thursday to you! ^.^   Thank you for making this composition! ^^ Suddenly, I want to see the binder that your father showed you. I think I need those sayings for me to have a better life. ^^,   Anyway, don\'t forget to read the corrections and suggestions I placed below each sentence that you made. Happy reading then and see you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     What\'s the best advice you\'ve gotten?Of course, I\'ve got countless teachings and advices. >> CORRECT! I think Those have helped recent my life. >> I think those have recently helped me have a good life. While I was preparing to get into university, My father presented me famous saying binder. >> While I was preparing to get into university, my father presented me a famous saying binder. >> OR: While I was preparing to get into university, my father presented me a binder with famous sayings. It had many good sayings. >> CORRECT! I read one saying a day through the year. >> CORRECT! I used to rip and attach some impressive saying page on the table. >> I used to rip and attach some impressive sayings\' pages on the table. It must encourage me. >> CORRECT! Even I\'ve heard many teaching, but my brain has been simple. >> Even I\'ve heard many teachings, my brain has been simple. I like sayings like to live what I want. >> I like sayings like \"Live life the way you want.\" Steven Jobs said \"If today were the last day of your life, would you want to do what tou are about to do today?\". >> Steven Jobs said, \"If today were the last day of your life, would you want to do what you are about to do today?\" My answer was no. >> CORRECT! So, I changed my attitude on my life. >> So, I changed my attitude about life. >> OR: Therefore, I changed my attitude about life.   >> OR:  My answer was no, so I changed my attitude about life.   I used to be hot tempered person and try to go fast on everthing. >> I used to be a hot tempered person and try to go fast on everything. But, I\'m trying to change my personality and decided to immigrate a place where everone live slow life. >> But, I\'m trying to change my personality and decide to immigrate a place where everyone lives a slow life. >> OR: However, I\'m trying to change my personality and decide to immigrate a place where everyone lives a slow life.   >> OR: I used to be a hot tempered person and try to go fast on everything, but I\'m trying to change my personality and decide to immigrate a place where everyone lives a slow life.