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I agree with you. It's already the 22nd of November. I started my english class on the 9th of November. Time flies so fast. I felt nervous at first. and I felt I was stupid.
but now I'm getting used to it
because of your kind review,I'm getting confident. I'm looking forward to next class.
I'd like to travel to Europe next summer. so I'm trying to practice English speeking.
Thank you for reading this.
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Good evening, [이름]!^^
Happy Tuesday to you! :)
Thank you so much for this composition.
I\'m glad to know that you\'re now becoming more confident in English.
You are doing well. Keep moving forward!^^
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. Can\'t wait for that. See you!^_-
_T. Mayleen_
I agree with you. It\'s already the 22nd of November.
>> Correct!
OR: It\'s already November 22.
I started my english class on the 9th of November.
>> I started my English class on the 9th of November.
OR: I started having this class last November 9.
Time flies so fast.
>> Correct!
I felt nervous at first. and I felt I was stupid.but now I\'m getting used to it because of your kind review,I\'m getting confident.
>> At first, I felt nervous and stupid, but now I\'m getting used to it. It\'s because of your kind reviews.
I\'m gaining confidence.
OR: I\'m becoming more confident.
I\'m looking forward to next class.
>> I\'m looking forward to our next class.
I\'d like to travel to Europe next summer. so I\'m trying to practice English speeking.
>> I\'d like to travel to Europe next summer, so I\'m practice English speaking.
Thank you for reading this.
>> Correct!
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