Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Oh, yeah, I totally forgot about your job as a headhunter. ^^
Appearance is quite an important factor in your job.
Not in the sense that you would only choose someone based on their looks, of course.
Thanks for putting in your two cents about this.
Enjoy the rest of your day. Take care!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
I think appearances are deceptive when I meet the person at first.
>> I think appearances are deceptive when you meet someone for the first time.
I am a headhunter so I meet many people who have different job experiences, ages, genders and so on.
>> I am a headhunter, so I meet various people with different job experiences, ages, genders, and so on.
I feel good when I meet the person having attractive appearances.
>> I feel good when I meet an attractive person.
Time goes fast.
>> CORRECT!
But when I meet the person without attractiveness, I feel boring.
>> But when I meet an unattractive person, I feel bored.
Apprearances and good looks are important in getting a job in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
I does\'nt mean that people are beautiful and handsome.
>> I don\'t mean people who are beautiful and handsome.
when I meet the handsome guy, If he is not smart and has bad attitude, I will feel boring too.
>> If I meet a handsome guy, who isn\'t smart and who has a bad attitude, I would feel bored too.
I never choose person just because of looks, but good looks is the strong point of person.
>> I would never choose someone based on their looks, but good looks is a person\'s strong point.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.