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2017-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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2. He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family. A: He dropped out of school becaus of his family they(who) need his support. 3. It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days. A : Bus company will announce the new schedule within the next few days. 4. There are many ways in which a student who is interested in meeting foreign students may come to know one. A students will come to know the ways that is meeting foreign students. 5. It is very unusual to find someone who has never told a deliberate lie on purpose. someone who has told a deliberate lie on purpose is unusual. 6. Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all. ??

강사 첨삭

Great job JM!

I know you tried your best to answer this homework.

I hope you could go over the sentences below.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


2. He dropped out of school on account of the fact that it was necessary for him to help support his family.
A: He dropped out of school becaus of his family they(who) need his support. 

>>> He dropped out of school to support his family.
 3. It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.
A : Bus company will announce the new schedule within the next few days.

>>> The bus company will probably announce its schedule during the next few days.
 4. There are many ways in which a student who is interested in meeting foreign students may come to know one.
A students will come to know the ways that is meeting foreign students.

>>> Any student who wants to meet foreign students can do so in many ways.
 5. It is very unusual to find someone who has never told a deliberate lie on purpose.
someone who has told a deliberate lie on purpose is unusual.

>>>  Rarely will you find someone who has never told a deliberate lie.
 6. Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.
??

>>> Disobeying safety regulations causes trouble.   

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