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Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for your time in writing an essay.

I totally appreciate it.

I loved reading about your point-of-view.

I think both are admired but on a different basis and qualifications.

Heroes are admired for their nobility and celebrities are admired for their good looks and talent.

Each have a different purpose.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion about the matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you in class tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry   

We should realize that it is not real and it is just a image.

>> We should realize that it is not real and it is just an image.

Because Most of celebrities are made from mass media like television or movies.

>> It\'s because most celebrities are made famous by mass media like television or movies.

But Hero is different.

>> But heroes are different.

We can learn right things from them.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> They can teach us good things.

When I was young , I had a hero who is musician \' Hae-chul Shin\' .

>> When I was young , I had a hero who is musician and his name is \' Hae-chul Shin\' .

I learned a lot of thing from him and all about that is still remind me right things.

>> I learned a lot of things from him and all about that still reminds me of the right things.

So We have to distinguish celebrities and heroes .

>> So we have to distinguish celebrities and heroes .

Also we should help other people to having a hero.

>> We should help other people to have a hero.