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How are you JM?

I hope you\'re doing fine there.

I made the necessary corrections below so if you have time, kindly go over them.

Take care and see you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

By spending a time with family , we can directly have a conversation the other one.

>>> By spending time with family, we can directly have a conversation with together.

I think eventhough we are able to talk with them in the house, It is not enough.

>>> I think even though we talk with them at home, it is not enough.

In my case, I often reserve my favorite facilities I\'ve been gone in front of east sea during summer vacation.

>>> In my case, I often reserve my favorite facilities in the east sea during summer vacation.

At that place, we always visit traditioal market to buy sea food and look aroud there.

>>> In that place, we always visit the traditional market to look around and to buy seafood.

andthen, on the clean shore, I enjoy swim[이름]g,fishing and taking a picture to the noon.

>>> And on the shore, I enjoy swim[이름]g, fishing and taking pictures at noon.

at that time without any concerns, It will become a my time for my family.

>>> That\'s a very great time to relax with family.

after passing few hours, we are having a meal and asking theirs condition like company life, planing of future, healthy and so on...

>>> After a few hours, we talked about our daily life while we eat our meal.

At that time, I truely express my opinion when i have some problems and then We just discuss about that. with comfortable vibe, atmosphere, it is a good chance to obtain and organize my thoughts.

>>> At that time, I comfortably express my opinions and share my problems to my parents. That\'s really a good place to organize my thoughts.

So, it lead to improve relation ship with family.

>>> Going on a vacation together is a good way to improve family relationship.