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Hi Mi[이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for going over this activity.
I know that you tried your best for this.
You can use this as a reference in the future.
Please go through the corrections.
Teacher Glenda
1.people
people gathered in the square.
>> Correct but you have to write it in a correct way
[People gathered in the square.]
2.world
the world is wonderful.
>> The world is wonderful.
3.because
i like apple. because sweet.
>> I like apple because it is sweet.
4.family
your family harmonious.
>> Your family is harmonious.
5.country
country is the birthplace of taekwondo.
>> My country is the birthplace of taekwondo.
6.problem
no problem.
>> I don\'t have any problem.
7.school
my school is jeonju.
>> My school is in Jeonju.
8.place
the place where we met is cafe.
>> The place where we met was in a café.
or
>> We met in a café.
9.money
i love money.
>> I love money.
10.child
young children go to elementary school.
>> Young children go to elementary school.
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