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2017-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

1.people people gathered in the square. 2.world the world is wonderful. 3.because i like apple. because sweet. 4.family your family harmonious. 5.country country is the birthplace of taekwondo. 6.problem no problem. 7.school my school is jeonju. 8.place the place where we met is cafe. 9.money i love money. 10.child young children go to elementary school.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi[이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for going over this activity.

I know that you tried your best for this.

You can use this as a reference in the future.

Please go through the corrections.


Teacher Glenda


1.people
people gathered in the square.
>> Correct but you have to write it in a correct way

[People gathered in the square.]
 2.world
the world is wonderful.
>> The world is wonderful.
3.because
i like apple. because sweet.
>> I like apple because it is sweet.
4.family
your family harmonious.
>> Your family is harmonious.
5.country
country is the birthplace of taekwondo.
>> My country is the birthplace of taekwondo.
6.problem
no problem.
>> I don\'t have any problem.
7.school
my school is jeonju.
>> My school is in Jeonju.
8.place
the place where we met is cafe.
>> The place where we met was in a café. 

or

>> We met in a café.
 9.money
i love money.
>> I love money.
10.child
young children go to elementary school.

>> Young children go to elementary school.

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