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2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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1) Mount Everest is_______Wonderful___________. 2) Yesterday evening _______at the bar___________. 3) At the moment_____Lighting flashed______________. 4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain____I want to go again___________. 5) We were really hungry______give us something to eat?_____________. 6) The famous book "David Copperfield”____i do like to read it myself, too_________. 7) I was watching TV _Frogram name is “muhandohun”___________. 8) Peter is very friendly and everybody_____likes peter____________. 9) I can't come with you because__I’m going to hospital___________. 10) The concert was really exciting and there were_touching._____________.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi[이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^


Thank you for doing this homework. :)

Now, what you have to do is go over the sentences again

and check the correct sentences I wrote.

This will practice your sentence construction.


Teacher Glenda


1) Mount Everest is_______Wonderful___________.
>> Correct
2) Yesterday evening _______at the bar___________.
>> Incomplete sentence

or

>>> Yesterday evening, I saw you at the bar.

 3) At the moment_____Lighting flashed______________.
>> At the moment a lightning flashed.

4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain____I want to go again___________.
>>We enjoyed our holyday in Spain so I want to go there again.

5) We were really hungry______give us something to eat?_____________.
>> We were really hungry so we ate a lot.

6) The famous book \"David Copperfield”____i do like to read it myself, too_________.
>> The famous book \"David Copperfield\" is very interesting, I want to read it myself.
7) I was watching TV _Frogram name is “muhandohun”___________.
>> I was watching TV today and the program is Muhan Dojeon.

8) Peter is very friendly and everybody_____likes peter____________.
>> Peter is very friendly and everybody likes him.
9) I can\'t come with you because__I’m going to hospital___________.
>> Correct
10) The concert was really exciting and there were_touching._____________.

>> The concert was really exciting and there were many people.


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