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~ Jacey
I don\'t think so.
>> Correct!
I think there is no right time to give up and stop trying.
>> Correct!
For example, I\'m not good at English, so do I have to give up and stop trying studing English?
>> Correct!
No. Then is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Absolutely not.
>> Correct!
I don\'t have to give up and there is no right time to give up.
>> Correct!
I think you might say \"Then should I never give up?\".
>> I think you might say \"Then I should never give up?.\"
I didn\'t mean to say \'never give up\'. I want to say \"you can rest, but you can\'t give up!\".
>> Correct!
Because you give up of something, all of your hard work end up with nothing!
>> Because if you give up on something, all your hard work will be for nothing.
You do not try for nothing, are you?
>> You don\'t try things just for nothing, right?
So my opinion is you can rest sometime but you can\'t give up and stop trying.
>> So, my opinion is that you can rest sometimes but you can never give up.
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