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Thank you for doing your homework today.
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~ Jacey
Think you are in this situation. You are walking around the park. Suddenly, you found a wallet. In the wallet there are some money. Then what would you? Many people think you have to find the owner or give it to a police center. Everyone think this is the right thing. But Some of them don\'t do the right thing. Through their mind they also think they have to find the owner or give it to a police center. But they actually don\'t translate thought into action. If I were this situation, I\'m sure I\'ll do the right thing. If I can do it, then you can do it, too! So translate thought into action!
>>> Imagine yourself in this situation. You are walking around the park and suddenly, you found a wallet. You looked and found money inside. What would you do? Many people think that they should find the owner of the wallet or surrender it to the police center because everyone thinks it is the right thing to do. But some people don\'t actually do the right thing. They think about finding the owner or giving it to the police but they actually won\'t do it. If I were in this situation, I\'m sure I\'ll do the right thing. If I can do it, you can do it too! So translate thought into actions!
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