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Hello, Yu [이름]! :)
I\'m happy to hear that you were doing great today.
I hope you got plenty of rest during the weekend.
See you tomorrow.
Good night!
~ Jacey
What is my dream job? Hmm...I usually don\'t think about that, so I was thinkig what am I good at and what do I like. People arround me always say I\'m good at everything except P.E. And I like everything except P.E.!! So my dream job is not sort of P.E. I like math and science, so I want to be a math or science teacher or I want to be a scientist. I\'m not sure I\'ll be a teacher or scientist. But I\'m sure I\'ll be a happy person.*^^*
>> I usually don\'t think about that, so, I was thinking about what I\'m good at and what I like. People around me always sat that I\'m good at everything except for P.E. I do like everything except P.E! So, my dream job is nothing related to P.E. I like Math and Science, so I want to be a math or science teacher. Or I could also be a scientist. I\'m not sure whether I\'ll be a teacher or a scientist, but I\'m sure I\'ll be a happy person.
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