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2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Kindly write about a positive experience with learning or using English. When I went to Hostel in Seoul, I met many people who are from another country each other. But I didn't need to be able to speak all language. If you can speak English than most foreigners whatever their country although you can not speak wall. Anyway it is positive experience to talk with foreigners.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]^^

Thank you for doing your homework~

Anyways, let me clarify this with you later:

 If you can speak English than most foreigners whatever their country although you can not speak wall.

I am looking forward to speaking with you!

Kindly write about a positive experience with learning or using English.
When I went to Hostel in Seoul, I met many people who are from another country each other.
But I didn\'t need to be able to speak all language.

>>When I went to a hostel in Seoul, I met many people who are from other countries, but I did not need to be able to speak all languages.
 If you can speak English than most foreigners whatever their country although you can not speak wall.

>>If you can speak English better than most foreigners, ~ (Let\'s talk about this later, thanks!)

Anyway it is positive experience to talk with foreigners.

>>Anyway, it is a positive experience to talk with foreigners.

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