Home Work!
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Good morning [이름]!
We are living in a materialistic world and it saddens me when I hear that other people judge others by what they have, and not who they are TT
Good thing you believe that trust is still important^^
Have a great day~
I disagree.
>>CORRECT!
It is true that most people judge as they can see like social status , material possessions and appearance.
>>It is true that most people judge others according to what they can see like social status, material possessions, and appearance.
But finally completing relationship both persons is how much trust each other.
>>However, something that completes the relationship between these people is how much they trust each other.
For example, when you will have big contract with someone who is possibility to conclude, if they doesn\'t trust you, you will fail to conclude of contract although how much money do you have.
>>For example, when you have big contract with someone who will conclude the possibility, and he doesn\'t trust you, you will fail to close the deal no matter how much money you have.
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